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how the challenge came about and took off as an online social movement, and then have a section that summarize the results of the engagement. Lastly, it might be a good idea to mention the multiple programs that were created through those partnerships and add how each program helped address the issue affecting veterans. Great article, I cannot wait to see the final result!
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establishment of mental wellness programs went, would be a great way to start. It would be useful to highlight its shortcomings, as well as any achievements in its creation and development. The sources they have are pretty good but, as the article develops, it may be useful to search for more sources, especially academic/scholarly ones.
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I think the introductory sentence of the article is actually very comprehensive. It touches on the main point of what the organization is and what it sets out to accomplish. However, I think there’s potential to edit the rest of the introduction in a way that expands the overall article. There are
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This article does a great job laying out information in a non-biased tone, but many details have been left out in summarizing information. Things like what specifically inspired the founders to start the non-profit, who was involved, the progression and statistics of the social media movement, and
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This organization is one of the most important assets;not only for our fellow comrades who have served/or sadly have become one of the statistics of probably the most unknown/spoken issues which is claiming far too many lives of our freedom fighters/our service men and women each and every day.
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