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452 Fifth Avenue, formerly known as the
Republic National Bank Building, is composed of four distinct sections. The ten-story Knox Building, at the southwest corner of 40th Street and Fifth Avenue, was designed by John H. Duncan in the Beaux-Arts style. The newer HSBC Tower (originally the Republic
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The current skyscraper at 452 Fifth Avenue was known as the
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National Bank Tower, which is an addition to the Knox
Building; it's also part of the skyscraper. There is also the Kress Building and a fourth (as yet unnamed) structure on 39th Street, which predate the tower addition but were substantially rebuilt when the skyscraper was built.
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The current owner markets the building as 452 Fifth Avenue so I have fixed it.
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and sold to HSBC. - probably need to explain they are a bank. Best Wishes,
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