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Primarily resulting from the issues surrounding my previous reviews, I shall maintain a particularly careful standard while reviewing this article; if my review appears to remain unsatisfactory, I would greatly appreciate a concomitant warning from the nominator. I shall initiate an inspection of the
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The entirety of the images within the article primarily remain licenced, with appropriate links provided to the necessitated
Creative Commons guidelines, with the exception of the singular image of the previous Emigrant Industrial Savings Bank building, which remains within the common domain;
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December 11, Coordinated Universal Time; all provided suggestions for alterations remain exactly that and following them primarily remains at the discretion of the nominator. Thank you for this opportunity; I look forward to reviewing this article.
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however, with regards to the caption upon the final image, as the entrance of the building does not remain displayed, perhaps an additionally appropriate caption would remain "The front of the building, as seen from below" or "The building en face, as seen from below".
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Per the discussion at the original reviewer's user talk page, I'm going to pick up the review. I hope to post some feedback by this weekend. It looks like a great deal of work has already gone into this entry, so I hope we can wrap this up without too much delay.
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Does the latter primarily remain the individual date upon which construction remained initiated, the date upon which construction remained completed or the duration within which construction occurred? A clarification would remain appreciated; thank you.
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Would “and the Tweed
Courthouse and New York City Hall, within City Hall Park, to the south” not remain appropriate? This would primarily maintain consistency, as the previous clauses possess a geographical description at the conclusion of the clause.
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The concatenation of these particular geographical terms may primarily remain a minor stylistic issue; perhaps their separation via the utilisation of commas or semicolons, at the discretion of the nominator, would remain preferable.
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Source 8, Citation A: The listed sentence primarily possesses an absence of support within the contents of the first page of the listed source; perhaps the provided information primarily remains located upon a varying page.
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All columns below the first floor except the side wall columns are filled with concrete, and all interior columns are fireproofed with 2 to 3 inches (51 to 76Â mm) of concrete held in place by 2 to 4 inches (51 to 102Â mm) of
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Would “except for the side wall columns” not remain additionally appropriate? This issue may primarily remain classified as particularly subjective; compliance primarily remains at the immediate discretion of the
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The source is in the public domain and is attributed accordingly. I would prefer not to paraphrase unless there's something specifically problematic with the text itself, such as if the wording is confusing.
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Perhaps a semicolon split may primarily remain appropriate between “views” and “their architects”; this may allow for the avoidance of potentially excessive continuous sentences, within my opinion.
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I realized that I forgot to ping the nominator when I left my feedback. Looking at the feedback, however, it is so minor that I was easily able to make the edits myself. I'll pass this entry now.
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Thanks for taking up the review. I really appreciate it. In response to your statement, don't worry - the past is in the past, just review this like you would any other article.
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Perhaps a comma between "caissons" and "extending would remain appropriate; this would primarily specify the component containing “extending” as a separate appositive addition.
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I may go through and clean up a stray comma or two, but the prose looks good to me except for these minor issues. Now I will finish up a source review I started earlier.
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In this case, the facade's base is made of rusticated granite blocks. The rest of the facade is also made of granite, which is not rusticated. I have reworded it.
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is a residential building at 49–51 Chambers Street between
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Citation A: 1. Charles T. Wills, Inc. would perhaps primarily remain preferred for the specification of the contractors.
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