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351: 1183: 1348:, another excellently written American Civil War article. Review: article moved to mainspace on 9 October and far exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited inline throughout to reliable sources; the sources are almost entirely offline, for which I am happy to AGF there is no overly close paraphrasing from; ALT1 is interesting, mentioned in the article and checks out to the source cited; image is fine at this scale and appropriately licensed; a QPQ has been carried out. Looks good to go - 599: 578: 383: 609: 367: 480: 459: 21: 490: 304: 193: 423: 1341: 126: 725: 252: 266: 224: 1080: 1036:
3 casualties. Note that when I first started writing Knowledge articles, we were supposed to write out numbers below 10 (eight, nine, 10, 11). Then it changed and we were supposed to be consistent and use digits (Out of 10,000 men, losses were 1 killed, 6 wounded, and 407 captured.) So, I would say
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Pleasant Hill and Jenkins' Ferry, paragraph 2: This refers to the Battle of Pleasant Hill starting with sentence 2 (I think), but there needs to be (1) a blue link to Battle of Pleasant Hill and (2) date it was fought.
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Prairie Grove, map: The V in Van Buren and the F in Fort Smith are truncated on my computer. Suggest: Remove Fort Smith since I believe it's not referred to in the text, and position Van Buren to the right.
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Pleasant Hill and Jenkins' Ferry, paragraph 2: "Pindall's unit lost 10 men in the fighting at Pleasant Hill: two slain and the others wounded." (Suggest: Pindall's unit lost 2 killed and 8 wounded ...")
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I plan to review this article. For class B reviews, I normally make minor fixes myself. But for class GA reviews, I expect the author to fix every typo that I discover. I will list these later.
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sank. (You could write "was sunk", but that implies that someone sank it or that it was sunk deliberately. The word is used correctly in this article's final paragraph - "The vessel sank".)
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War's end, paragraph 2: "Over the course of the unit's existence, about 550 men served in it at one point or another." ("at one point or another" is redundant)
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Background and formation, paragraph 2, last sentence: If you know the name of the defunct artillery or partisan ranger companies, please include that.
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IDK if this meets the interestingness requirement, don't militaries traditionally train people in skills they don't have to begin with?
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Infobox should include: dates = Nov. 29, 1862 – May 26, 1865 (or June 7), size = battalion, notable_commanders = Lebbeus A. Pindall.
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Background and formation, paragraph 2: "if practical" (I think it works better if you move it to the end of the sentence.)
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Added for the date. I've always understood the notable commanders and meaning wikinotable, which I don't think Pindall is
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Background and formation, paragraph 2: "On April 21, the CS Congress" (I think you mean 1862, but please be specific.)
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Pleasant Hill and Jenkins' Ferry, paragraph 4, last sentence: "one man killed and four wounded" : -->
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1 man killed and 4 wounded. (Consistency: In other places, casualties are expressed in digits.)
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Helena and Little Rock: paragraph 2: "the Confederate who had taken Graveyard Hill were" : -->
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Introduction paragraph 2: Tense: "The steamboat carrying the unit back to Missouri sunk" : -->
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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below.
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Pleasant Hill and Jenkins' Ferry, paragraph 4, sentence 2: Typo: "August 30" : -->
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Introduction paragraph 2: Tense: "When a Confederate force attack the" : -->
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Prairie Grove, paragraph 2, note a: Typo: "report did not addressed" : -->
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Here is my first pass. Please fix or argue your case if you disagree.
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Prairie Grove, paragraph 3: "until the Confederate withdrew" : -->
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Helena and Little Rock: paragraph 1, sentence 2: "July 3" : -->
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Done (Ft. Smith is only mentioned as the place the unit formed
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July 3, 1863. (The year 1863 is missing from the section.)
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Drive-by comment, but I suppose that one could work.
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Prairie Grove, paragraph 2: "three casualties" : -->
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