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2) It would be good if the article could consistently point out when an event is part of the storyline and when its real. For example you have "soon Spears began to fall in love with her, which began interfering with their matches" From checking the sources it sounds like thats manufactured by the
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Good nicely written article, you guys have done a fine job building a coherent narrative from the various sources. Im delighted to be able to pass this article. Some general comments in case you want to progress this to FA class.
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PS, as there is a massive backlog of GA candidates waiting to be reviewed, including in the Sports class, please review one if you have time!
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3) Further copy editing would help. The prose quality is good, but I personally think it needs further polishing to be FA class.
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producers, though not knowing much about wrestling Im not sure, may he really did fall for her?
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1) You probably dont need the 3 references in the lede as you link to them in the article.
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Thanks very much! I really appreciate you taking the time to do the review. ♥
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