Talk:Constantine II of Scotland

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as obscure and boring, or a topic of pedantry that should be avoided in favour of science articles, or others; history should aim to enlighten as many as possible, and to serve as many as possible, and in this case it means clearly depicting the original/up to date form of the monarch's name in the relevant language, but other than that using the name forms which would give least surprise to the vast majority of readers. In this case, popular usage is, in the case of the well-known such as the Malcolms and Duncans and Macbeth and Kenneths, or the inconsistently translated such as the Constantines, in favour of the Anglicised forms. To go with that is not serving the Lowest Common Denominator, it is ensuring that as many as possible get the full benefit of these articles; and it would be far more graceful to accept that, accept the changes and allow us to all improve these articles to the standard this one generally (with the exception of the names) exhibits, than to bog down in semantics and continue the impression the Scottish articles give as inaccessible to non-Scots, or taken over by hard-line Gaels, neither of which is and should be the case.

3405:) There are users who don't particularly like it because of 1) their editorial philosophy, 2) simplistic and unthoughtful application of certain wikipedia guidelines and 3) (unfortunately, but inevitably) hostility to Gaelic. We on the other side believe that anglicizing the forms is not sensible (most of the reasons are already on the page). Anyways, a modus vivendi existed, and has existed for most of the last few years. I don't see why seeking to disrupt this will do any good. I personally have seen all the arguments for and against, and believe there is no reasonable choice except to use native forms in the text for all the kings before the accession of Edgar at least, if not Mael Coluim IV. 3794:- she called herself "Katherina" or "Katherine", and "Katherine" is often used in sources regarding her; but "Catherine" is the most commonly used form of name, so that is used, with - aside from the occasional anon - few protests). If a reader wants to read more about the subject: if they are reading a 'popular' work it will use the anglicisation; if they are reading a tract, they will no doubt have the knowledge of the subject and the time necessary to read the source carefully to not be confused by the usage of the less common Gaelic name. Our task is to satisfy as many people as possible, not please a few who like using the original forms. 2271:

become niche, perceived as editable only by Scots, and that is unacceptable. Angus, you've seen other projects - should we have an article entitled "Philip IV of France" which then consistently refers to him as "Philippe le Beau", and everyone else by their epithets? These articles need to be standardised with the rest of wikipedia, and internally consistent, and give the impression of being informative...because at the moment, the attitude appears to be one of "we say it's like this, if a reader can't figure out the difference between Cinaed mac Mael Coluim and Cinaed mac Dubh, he must be an idiot."

509: 488: 692: 1840:"the death of Ímar grandson of Ímar": is Ímar their leader? If so, I think it should be mentioned; if not, why is he named? Could we also say where he comes from -- e.g. "a Viking leader based in Ireland" or whatever is the case? He is mentioned again below: "under Sihtric Cáech and Ragnall, said to be more grandsons of Ímar"; so he's worth a few more words, though now it occurs to me that I don't know which Ímar the latter reference is intended to refer to. The elder one, presumably, because of the grandson comment. Is there a better way to disambiguate this? 1484:

the reader to steal for their essay. But I'm damned if I can think of anything that's verifiable and interesting that I could add. The best I can find is Barbara Crawford having a snipe at writers who were supposedly turning our man here into a "patriotic king, such as Alfred the Great or Brian Boru, who saved their people and their culture from the depradations of the pagan invaders." But then I'd need to find someone who thought he did save "Scotland" from the Vikings, and this is all quite long enough without adding some straw men to knock down.

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question, as it doesn't seem that you have a very high opinion of the readers. Why should a wikipedia article esp. of FA length dumb down the forms used in virtually all the sources it cites? How will this benefit the reader? Constantine II is cannot be a "popularly" accessible topic without dumbing down the content (the names are the least important issue here), it's obscure and difficult by nature. There is no getting around this unless wikipedia becomes significantly less ambitious in its coverage.

3811:"Constantine, son of Áed (Mediaeval Gaelic: Constantín mac Áeda; Modern Gaelic: Còiseam mac Aoidh), known in most modern regnal lists as Constantine II, nicknamed An Midhaise, "the Middle Aged" (before 879 – 952) was an early King of Scotland". Re-reading this, the suggestion is that Constantine was "nicknamed An Midhaise" until 952, when he became nicknamed something else, (such as "Constantine the Old"). There may be some MOS protocol here, but would this not be better as something like: 3790:

accessible, you are probably in the wrong place - the whole point of wikipedia is to make an encyclopaedia accessible to everyone and as comprehensive a resource as possible. That cannot be done if your attitude is "it's an obscure subject, so why bother helping out the readers" (and, by the way, it does not matter if the sources use a different name. The articles use the most common name, regardless of what the person was called back then or what sources describe him/her as (see

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English forms were more appropriate and common for the monarchs. That being the case, you cannot claim that the Gaelic forms are more appropriate for names which wikipedia officially lists in the English forms. People expect to find them under those names, that's why they are at those article titles. That being the case, those forms of names, or acceptable variants, should be used when referring to such people in their own articles and preferably elsewhere.

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kings are popularly known by anything. In reality, you think even people prepared to read these articles (which I doubt you have done) would be too stupid to follow some names from another culture. Well, these guys came from another culture so that's just what happens. Most English speakers who've advanced into the later years of high school are already used to this. The problem is in your head, and your solution is ultimately self-defeating.

2093:. I'm not inclined to waste any more time on it when the quality of argument won't rise above "what does the Columbia Encyclopedia call it?". If that means that the words in big letters at the top have no relation to the content of the article, that's something I can live with, especially here where the difference is not so great. There's no Manual of Style page concerned with the avoidance of cognitive dissonance. Probably just as well. 519: 708: 774: 753: 145: 3454:(BTW, I personally, and I don't expect others to accept this for wiki purposes, tend to dislike calling Mael Coluim IV "Malcolm", and that's because it creates the impression (esp. in those modern works which use Mael Coluim for Mael Coluim III but Malcolm for Mael Coluim IV) that "Malcolm" was an actual name in existence at the time. It wasn't. The name was still Mael Coluim, it hadn't migrated to another linguistic culture). 420: 399: 54: 3659:

Marion Campbell (a Scot, no less!) talks of Malcolm III and Malcolm IV in her pop-biography of Alexander III. I could no doubt find more if I wasn't home for the holidays, but the above at least appear to think that their readers are most familiar with the anglicised forms of the monarchical names. The question thus is, "who is using Gaelic forms, and can they be taken as representative of what readers as a whole expect?"

325: 784: 879: 1980:"The kingdom which begins to appear in Constantín's reign continues in much the same form until the Davidian Revolution began to create a new form of Scottish kingship in the 12th century." I think the present tense in the first half of this sentence contrasts a bit oddly with the past tense in the second half, used to describe subsequent events. I think it would be OK to put the whole thing in simple past tense. 858: 315: 294: 2488:

However, if current reliable sources are using Gaelic forms, then readers who start here and go on to the references are going to be confused too, because they won't see "Constantine" or "Donald" (etc.). Our job is to reflect current usage. Here the difficulty is that common usage in popular culture is not the same as common usage in reliable sources. Is there a relevant naming policy that can be cited?

724: 2676:"Borderline cases: Some cases are less clear-cut. There is a trend in part of the modern news media and maps to use native names of places and people, even if there is a long-accepted English name. For example, US newspapers generally refer to the Olympics in Torino even though most English texts still call the city Turin. However, newspapers in other parts of the English speaking world still use Turin. 889: 262: 200: 176: 1761:"the kingdom of Scotland, the founding of which is dated to 843": this is confusing though I suspect that it's the same confusion as with the lead and that there's nothing wrong here, I just don't follow it. Specifically the use of the term "the kingdom of Scotland" seems in conflict with the material in the first paragraph of the lead, which implies the kingdom was called Alba at this time. 3471:

however, have such, are articled as such, and are expected to be found under such. It is not unworkable to use the anglicised forms - at least, the many many people who use the English forms don't appear to think so. Moreover, your division appears to be based on opinion: there are Scottish forms for Alexander and James (and 'Constantine', if I recall my history correctly, did

2862:"An editor who can edit any of these articles decently will not be unfamiliar with these forms, as they are the dominant ones is the modern reliable sources." What about those readers who simply want to learn about Scotland, and have trouble doing so when the forms used are unfamiliar. (And if, incidentally, these name forms are not catering to Gaelic/Scots users 1460:

probably I will. For Dumville/Taylor (etc) I listed the article as well as the book it's in as that seems to be conventional. As for "s.a." it stands for "sub anno" and means "under this year in this annal". Nobody asked for it to be explained in any previous reviews, but that doesn't mean they won't ask next time! The access date thing is a feature of

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reference to Constantín son of Cináed. And when I saw "Donald I" and "Owen I" of Strathclyde, I was quite sure I could distinctly hear the sound of an axe being ground. All that was missing was C's aunt being renamed Mary, and the "Iversons" being called Reginald and Godfrey, and we'd have been right back in 1850 or thereabouts.

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be French or names otherwise familiar in the modern English language (like William, Robert, Stephen, etc, etc, rather than Gilla Comgain, Mael Brigte, Bethoc, etc). For Edgar, Alexander and David, those names are not Gaelic, so there is no problem. Mael Coluim IV is the last Scottish monarch to have a native name.

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To describe Constantine as an early 'King of Scotland' is potentially misleading because the definition of what constituted 'Scotland' has changed greatly over time. King of the Scots and King of Alba certainly, perhaps even King of Scot-land. But the Scot-lands were not Scotland in anything like the

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In my view there's a scheme of things. Today, professionals in this area consistently and overwhelmingly use native forms. If you wikipedia is to depart from this, there must be significantly good reasons of editorial philosophy ... not a semi-religious believe in "Anglicize Everything". If a popular

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start out in Scotland...), yet you don't use them; furthermore, native forms have no relevance in this matter - we don't talk of Queen Viktoria and her husband Prince Albrecht, nor of King Seumas I of England. Furthermore, the use of modern day forms of names which were not used at the time is common

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An editor who can edit any of these articles decently will not be unfamiliar with these forms, as they are the dominant ones is the modern reliable sources. You keep making up all these fictional people. Maybe you'd be better writing a novel or something. Also, I have news for you. Those names are no

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I've gone through and struck/responded; just three points left, one of which you're thinking about and one which is pretty minor. The remaining one is the article name. I had a think about the equivalent situation in Anglo-Saxon articles, and I guess this is going to come up most often with saints,

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Can we stop with this? Alba literally means Scotland, we're talking about two entirely different languages. It is absolutely redundant and asinine to continually keep including in every article what Scotland/the Kingdom of Scotland was known as in different languages of the time. This is the English

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Hardly. I'm aiming at making articles both informative and accessible. They are not accessible if they use names that the majority of readers are not familiar with, and in such a way as to confuse rather than enlighten the reader. It is respectful to the subject of history to avoid characterising it

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No. It's that ... and I've learned this by years of writing on these topics ... there are too many non-anglicizable Gaelic proper names in the articles for the kings before Edgar (before David actually) for it to be workable (to my taste at least), whereas after David most of the other names tend to

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must have between 300 and 400 articles in it and its subcategories. It would be strange indeed if Gaelic names were comprehensible if used of subjects one side of the North Channel or Druim Alban but not on the other. No doubt there's an argument to be made, but it won't be made by assertion. Still,

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Holy cow. OK, I agree, it's not worth arguing about. I like your comment about there being no MOS guideline on cognitive dissonance. I think if you take it to FAC, I'd support on the grounds that the move debate wins the argument on the article title, but secondary sources win the argument on how

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I think an adjective or adjectival phrase to qualify "sagas" might be useful in the sentence that starts: "The value of sagas as sources of historical narrative". I knew of the sagas, but didn't know whether any had been written e.g. by the Vikings in England. Would it be accurate to say something

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To use an English style where such is commonly used is not dumbing down, it's making a possible complicating factor easier so that interested readers can read the article without having to worry about name-forms they haven't heard of. Moreover, if you do not believe that you can make these articles

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Nor is this a matter of names in different cultural forms, but different languages: Gaelic. This is English language wikipedia. We use English language forms, and make sure that the articles are accessible both to those who know about these kings and those who do not. A reader unfamiliar with these

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Mr Christie has more or less destroyed your argument, though he probably never intended that. Anyone prepared to read these articles will not benefit by being mollycoddled from the real forms, as he will encounter them eventually anyway. The ask a New Yorker argument destroys the premise that these

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You cannot justify obscurity by arguing that most people won't have heard of these people. If you make the articles inaccessible, that can only continue. If we're playing "ask the New Yorker", is the average New Yorker more likely to be comfortable navigating through "Constantine II" or "Constantin

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If you've read it that closely, for which I am extremely grateful, was there anything that didn't make sense? I feel it's a bit anti-climactic. No, that's too weak: it doesn't have any ending, it just sort of stops. If was the Deacon, I'm sure there would be some incisive conclusions at the end for

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Reading the list "olume 1" is wrong, it should be the dates. Duplicate link gone: cut and paste is too easy. The "relics" is in lower case in the original. I'm not sure why it doesn't italicise the series names "Making of Scotland" or "The New Edinburgh History of Scotland"; I could remove them and

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An accurate article about a 11th or 10th century Scottish king longer than a few paragraphs will not be easily accessible nor enjoyable to the kind of audience that is thrown off by seeing Mael Coluim rather than Malcolm. What kind of demographic are you aiming these articles at? This is a serious

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for its own sake. I don't get this hypocrisy (not coming from you, I've no idea what you think of science articles) that science articles should aim to be up to date and scholarly, but historical topics , even ones with all the technical specialization required in this area, are to be treated with

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Sources? Those writing for general consumption appear to believe that the Anglicised forms are most expected. Pears gives the Anglicised forms. Lines of Succession begins with Duncan I and gives Anglicised forms. Frank McLynn talks of Macbeth and Malcolm III in 1066, the Year of the Three Battles.

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or POV, and so that they are accessible to the vast majority of readers who are not familiar with Gaelic usages due to such usages being very rare." We shouldn't be doing what encarta does, and we shouldn't be advocating progress for the sake of progress, we should be doing what works and what is

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On the contrary: anyone willing to go to the text books may be assumed to have a certain level of knowledge regarding the Kings already, and so will be able to understand the textbooks used as sources here. On the other hand, we have to contemplate that there are editors who are not familiar with

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It is remarkably inconsistent to use English article names and Gaelic names in the text. All that does is give the Scottish articles a bad image, as a niche of eccentrics not bothering to keep them in line with the rest of wikipedia. Which is not true, you only have to look at this article to see

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A family tree would be useful and might really clarify the lead, in which case it might be better to simplify the information in the lead and move it down to body text next to the tree. If I understand the text correctly there are two people named "Constantín mac Cináeda"; if the standard way to

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It's certainly true that I find the English forms of the name easier to remember. I was unfamiliar with any of this history before I read the article, and did not have any preconceptions that "Constantine" was the natural name, but the unfamiliar Gaelic forms are a bit more difficult to parse.

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know about the subject already. It has nothing to do with Anglocentrism or Victoriana, it has everything to do with the fact that you cannot use foreign or obscure or confusing name or language forms in an encyclopaedia whose readers are primarily speakers of British English. These articles have

1510:"The kingdom which began to appear in Constantín's reign continued in much the same form until the Davidian Revolution in the 12th century. As with his ecclestiastical reforms, his political legacy was the creation of a new form of Scottish kingship that lasted for two centuries after his death." 1500:

Well I'm not going to try and add to Mike Christie's comprehensive comments save to say that I agree a family tree would be helpful. With regard to the ending, I rather enjoyed the pathos, but perhaps you could employ a final turn of phrase that emphasises the humility of his last years with the

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Since I have never advocated Encarta as source, I feel perfectly happy in saying that we shouldn't follow it here (or anywhere). Moreover, since you believe that being no different from encarta would make us backward, you will no doubt agree that we should be significantly different by avoiding

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These names may not be to your taste, but fortunately they were to the taste of the hundreds of historians who wrote before you of "Constantine II" and "Kenneth I". I'm not suggesting rendering names such as Maelbrigte into English, because they have no commonly used English form; the monarchs,

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It's really quite simple: if "Mael Coluim mac Cinaed" or "Donnchad mac Maelcoluim" were really the more commonly used names, these people would be articled under those names. They are not, and there appears to have been something of a struggle over that in the past, ending in agreement that the

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This last part "The Kingdom of Alba, a name which first appears in Constantine's lifetime, was situated in modern-day Scotland." is particularly ridiculous as you are effectively literally saying: "The Kingdom of Scotland, a name which first appears in Constantine's lifetime, was situated in

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Professionals don't overwhelmingly use native forms though, and the common popular usage is certainly not so. This isn't a semi-religious Anglicise everything - this is a "let's get the articles conforming to the article names so that they don't look as though they've been got at by a vandal

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Equally, it could seem like a point is being made rather untidily when ] and ] are changed to ] and ], but ] and ] are not changed at all. Then the section heading "Pictland from Constantín son of Fergus to Constantín son of Cináed" was left as it was, but the article no longer contained any

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While the sources for north-eastern Britain, the lands of the kingdom of Northumbria and the former Pictland, are limited and late, those for the areas on the Irish Sea and Atlantic coasts—the modern regions of north-west England and all of northern and western Scotland—are non-existent, and

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think that Constantín is best. It was Causantín before I started revising it again. As far as traditional naming goes - the tradition of all dead generations weighs like an Alp on the brains of the living, allegedly - until some point in the C19th, this chap was usually Constantine III. His

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I had to look up "synchronism", and even then I wasn't sure that the meaning I found ("chronological arrangement of historical events and personages so as to indicate coincidence or coexistence; also : a table showing such concurrences") was the right one. If the word can't be linked to an

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be at "Ermenilda of Ely" or at "Eormenhild"? If the historiography can't give you good direction, then it's certainly difficult. But having said all that, it just seems odd to have one title for the article and a different name used within the article. (In fact you don't allude to the

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This sounds like an editing error: "the Chronicle of the Kings of Alba is alone in giving Constantín the victory, and left Ragnall in control of all or most of Northumbria". It wasn't the Chronicle that left Ragnall in control; do you mean the Chronicle asserts that Ragnal was in

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My view of the names is on record here and there. On my anti-regnal-number side I have nearly all of the sources which were used to write the article, on the other there are mainly a heap of encyclopedias. I don't really care if this is Causantín/Constantín/Custantín mac Áeda or

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Besides, the big difference between your examples and these is that the Scottish Kings are articled under English names. It is not appropriate to article a person or subject under one name, and then consistently refer to him or it throughout the encyclopaedia by another name.

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If people want to read up on the term Alba and its origins/meanings etc. etc. there are many, many articles for that. We are causing needless confusion and clutter in these historical Scotland articles by continually switching between terms for the same polities/entities.

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the best, in structure and use of the Monarch infobox. If editors wouldn't mind going over that first article, and then making any adjustments they feel are necessary here, as well as bringing over a version of the monarch infobox, I'll promote this article and

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been dragged up since you first started introducing these forms in 2004/2005. All using Gaelic forms which most readers haven't heard of, in contradiction to the established English forms, serves to do is confuse the readers whom you are meant to be informing.

3815:"Constantine, son of Áed (Mediaeval Gaelic: Constantín mac Áeda; Modern Gaelic: Còiseam mac Aoidh), (before 879 – 952) known in most modern regnal lists as Constantine II and nicknamed An Midhaise, "the Middle Aged", was an early King of Scotland". 2982:

Nah. A user just follows links. Only wikipedia editors with your views do the above. As for clumsy, clumsy is when non-anglicized medieval Scottish or Irish names float about in the same article as a few anglicizations. I believe Mr McLellan calls it

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Could we avoid using terms like "ludicrous"? I don't think any of the opinions here are ludicrous, though one opinion might be more supportable than another. Even insupportable arguments are better opposed by reason than by characterization, in any

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someone's done a brilliant job - it's just a shame that they didn't consider that "Constantine mac Fergus" and "Constantine mac Cinaed" and "Constantine mac Aed" aren't terribly useful reference points to anyone not already familiar with the subject.

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OK - I would still prefer a word of explanation. I see ecclesiastical institutions mentioned further down, and one could regard judicial and financial as subsets of administrative, so how about "the ecclesiastical and administrative institutions"?

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I removed the tinted boxes. I'm not sure how to get rid of the chequered stuff. I suspect it has something to do with the opacity of the background of my image. I'll try to get rid of that but no luck so far. If all else fails, I can try making it

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Wow ... even Encarta is using native forms. Now the argument by the Anglicize Everything school of thought is often that wiki shouldn't be significantly different from Encarta. Are they seriously asking for Knowledge (XXG) to be more backwards!

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I've struck this, but personally I don't particularly like the grey background to the names or the chequered grey background to the whole thing. However, I'm not very reliable on aesthetic issues so that's just a comment; others may not agree.

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OK. No agreement on this issue has ever been reached, or probably will ever be reached. There was controversy over renaming the article titles to native names, but the use of the native names in the text has been well established on wikipedia.

1713:"The earliest genealogical records"; does this refer to more than the Poppleton ms and the lists described by Anderson? If not, I'd suggest just changing this to "These early" to avoid the implication of other sources you haven't mentioned. 2836:

more Gaelic than Æthelheard or Æthelwulf are English. A Gaelic speaker would be in little better a position. In fact, Constantin or Causantin is closer to Constantine than it is to Coiseam, which is the Gaelic form of this king's name.

715: 607: 1960:"the austere reformers Céli Dé movement": I'm not sure of the intended construction here, so I can't tell for certain, but should there be an apostrophe in "reformers'"? Or perhaps it should read "the austere Céli Dé reform movement"? 1884:"The northern part of Northumbria had probably been ruled by Ealdred son of Eadulf since 913, and perhaps all of the kingdom": I'd restructure that sentence if I were you. The last clause is too far from the noun phrase it modifies. 699: 603: 1567:

The first paragraph of the lead is quite confusing. My thought process is in italics in this copy of some of it: "Constantín's grandfather Cináed mac Ailpín (died 858) was the first of the family known to have ruled in Pictland.

4063:"Constantine II; born no later than 879; died 952) was an early King of Scotland, known then by the Gaelic name Alba. The Kingdom of Alba, a name which first appears in Constantine's lifetime, was situated in modern-day Scotland." 3559:

online encyclopaedia with professional editors working to less ambitious goals than wikipedia have chosen native forms too, it can only be a backward step for wikipedia reAnglicize them. That's the way I see the encarta matter.

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You're just inaccurate here on a point of fact. Professionals today working in the area do overwhelmingly use native names. Now, derivative works don't so much, but I wasn't referring to them as you'll see from my phraseology.

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Causantín/Constantín/Custantín son of Áed, just so long as it's not the myth-perpetuating Constantine II. But perhaps we should just forget NPOV in this field and perpetuate outdated ideas: Scotland, founded 843 by Kenneth I,

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modern sense but much, much smaller, merely one kingdom amongst a number of northern British kingdoms which only centuries later were collectively designated as 'Scotland' in the sense we use the word today. Cassandra.

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Some notes as requested. I know little or nothing about Scottish history in this period, so this is the viewpoint of someone new to the subject. I've numbered the comments in case that's useful in responding to them.

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A general point that I've just noticed: the article uses "Constantín" throughout, but is titled "Constantine". Shouldn't these be consistent? (I've no idea which would be preferred, but the lack of consistency seems

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refer to them is "Constantín son of Fergus" (and so on) then I'd put that in the tree. The section titled "Pictland from Constantín son of Fergus to Constantín son of Cináed" really makes me think a tree is necessary.

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This is a trivial point, but you might mention that his reign is 43 years at the point you mention its length; I went off looking for his reign dates in the infobox and it would be nice if it was right there in the

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Thank you for the rant. I sugggest, however, you give some consideration to those readers who are not familiar with the Gaelic forms, and who could consequently be expected to have trouble navigating the articles.

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That's everything I can see. Overall I think the structure is right, and the detail and sourcing all seem fine. This is a long list but it's essentially superficial. If all these were fixed I'd support at FAC.

4189: 1950:"Edmund spent the remainder of Constantín's reign rebuilding the empire. For the last years of Constantín's reign there is only . . ." I'd suggest rephrasing to eliminate the repetition of "Constantín's reign". 1795:"married to Constantín's aunt": any reason not to name her here, rather than a few sentences later? (Seems like the tree should include her, and maybe show the marriage to Flann Sinna though not his relatives. 115: 35: 1592:) Sorry if that's a bit harsh; I think the information in the paragraph is good, but I think there are a couple of key words or clauses missing that would straighten everything out for a novice like myself. 1638:, and I know there are others; or does "northern" mean further north than that in this context? Or is the context meant to be historically constrained to be post 800 or so, or even just Constantín's reign? 1050: 470: 2680:

Whichever is chosen, one should place a redirect at the other title and mention both forms in the lead." Most readers would be more surprised by "Constantin mac Aeda" than "Constantine II of Scotland".

4184: 3296:("Most general rule overall: use the most common form of the name used in English "). Similarly, if popular usage uses Malcolm III, Macbeth, and Kenneth MacAlpin(e) then that is what should be used. 1864:"claims that Queen Æthelflæd, Alfred the Great's daughter": I think you can drop the "Alfred the Great's daughter" clause; that's mentioned above and it's not integral to this part of the narrative. 1775:"The record portrays Constantín as the last Pictish king." I think it would be nice to note which chronicle this comment refers to, though the note can stay in a footnote rather than the main text. 2987:. As you'll know, even from browsing these articles, most of these names have no one anglicized form. Shall we call Áed Hugh, or Giric Greg"? And what shall we call Flaithbertach or Mael Petair? 1148:. It is impressively referenced, well written, and fairly comprehensive. Keep up the good work. If you want more clarification on my reasons for promotion, please leave a message on my talk page. 2423:

Actually Michael, 99% of Scots would find the Gaelic names incomprehensible too. It's only a tiny minority of Scots that would understand them, but they have their own encyclopaedia here

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Mr Sanders seems to believe this conversation is going his way, and is citing it as he wages a revert war on all these articles. Is there some secret writing here that anons can't see?

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They should be used throughout the article. It's ludicrous - use the English title for the article, and then consistently use the Gaelic form in the article body? Why do you do that?

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You are here to impart information, and you are meant to impart that information to Scots and non-Scots alike. I would sincerely hope that you do actually care about the non-Scots.

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Can you add an adjective to "institutions which would last until Davidian Revolution"? Are these institutions ecclesiastical, administrative, financial, judicial, all the above?

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kings cannot be assumed to be competent reading Gaelic name forms, and you would have to go a long way to find a non-Scot preferring "Mac Bethad mac Findleach" over "Macbeth".

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it's good to see that the question is being discussed. Experienced editors would of course know better than to just revert back and forth, because that would be edit warring.

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Mickie, I hand it to you, you've put a good argument for not omitting the standard anglicizations in the opening line. You've convinced me at least they should stay.

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for example; older sources, church sources, and popular usage are likely to have "Ethelbert"; the article has its current name as a result of a discussion at the

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It is the former group you brought up, i.e. the editor. I think the latter group, the readers, have already been well covered here. You should re-read the above.

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Cellach is mentioned and explained twice, once in each of the last two sections. The second mention could probably be terser; again a family tree would help.

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I left Céli Dé as the redirect: Culdees, to me anyway, suggests C19th religious gentlemen arguing over who the rightful heirs of Patrick/Columba/etc were.

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Domnall's reputation is suggested by the epithet dasachtach, a word used of violent madmen and mad bulls, used of him in the eleventh century synchronisms

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I don't find it offensive; I do find it an immature way to launch into an objection (I also find the remarks about axe-grinding an example of bad faith).

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I don't recall having seen the charter evidence of the link between Constantine and Æthelstan before Woolf mentioned it, but checking I now see that the

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Most users would never have heard of these kings, Mickie. I don't think "ask any New Yorker" how he refers to Constantin mac Aeda is really gonna work.

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They are from Irish collections, specifically the earliest is a genealogy of this Constantín's great-grandson Constantín son of Cuilén. It survived in

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mac Aeda"? You seem to justify the previous state of these articles on the basis that no-one other than those already familiar with them would care.

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We have articles of various lengths and qualities on many of the subject's contemporaries in insular north-west Europe. The titles tell the story:

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As far as the name goes, the references are inconsistent. Personally, I'd have preferred Custantín, because that's the one version that there is

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Most of the Kings have very well-established Anglicised forms: I believe Mr McLellan's complaint was he thinks them Victorian in association.

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Others have suggested that the ceremony in some way endorsed Constantín's kingship, suggesting a link to later royal inaugurations at Scone.

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Why Malcolm IV? Did the Kings all suddenly become English when he died? It's inconsistent, it goes against wikipedia policy, and this issue

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I have added an image of Constantine which is certainly not contemporary, but is an image of what he may have looked like nevertheless.

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Fine by me, but I think we could drop "and nicknamed An Midhaise, "the Middle Aged"" because that's not even mentioned in the article.

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predecessor - Donald II for most of the C19th and C20th - was Donald VI. It's a long story. It's also a long story on Knowledge (XXG).

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The map is good. You might consider identifying the Moray Firth, and the Firths of Forth and Tay, since all are mentioned in the text.

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Well, I stole your version. I've added a sad little family tree. No doubt there were better and easier ways to draw it. Thanks again.

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The profile picture of Constantine II has the portrait listed as Constantin III incorrectly, but it is not mentioned for clarity.

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uses one just like this. I know that this image has been controversially used before and removed, but I believe it should remain.

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Constantín's family dominated Fortriu from at least 789, and, if Constantín was a kinsman of Óengus mac Fergusa, from around 730.

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Several "king of scots" articles were nominated at the same time recently. They are all good quality articles, and meet the basic

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If, as has been suggested, Gaelic names will be incomprehensible to our readers, someone will have their work cut out for them:

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for GA status. However, part of the 'stability' requirement, in my mind, is some consistency between sets of articles. I like

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I banished that from the lead. They're good questions, but that's not the place to try and answer them. I hope this is ok.

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Well spotted. I've had a look at the sources and it should have been pages 357–358. I've corrected the page. Thanks. -

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to delete these "External links modified" talk page sections if they want to de-clutter talk pages, but see the

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One should use judgment in such cases as to what would be the least surprising to a user finding the article.

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who often have an anglicized name that is different from the version used in historical scholarship. Should

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Doesn't address this very well. Going with what recently published reliable sources use is what I would do.

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article used to use an engraving, before it switched to a stained glass window, another later depiction.

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