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I suppose I would not have split out discovery and nomenclature into separate sections but given how this bird has been studied makes sense. Overall, nice work.
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At first look, the article is comprehensive (which is good), but somewhat verbose - I can see multiple places where the sentences can be trimmed like
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however, it may be reminiscent of the coal tit (Parus ater), which is very common in Corsican forests and has similar markings on its head
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The Corsican nuthatch consumes mainly pine nuts, but also small flying insects in summer, as would a flycatcher.
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The Corsican nuthatch is the only current species of bird endemic to Corsica, and even to metropolitan France.
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The most geographically related nuthatch is the Eurasian nuthatch which inhabits mainland France
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Whitehead's opinion was that the bird was not a species that could be described.
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I ended up removing it, because i think its repetitive on orevious statement.
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You could remove almost all the "very"s - they don't add anything.
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for help in naming some small birds he had been able to collect
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No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):
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The Corsican nuthatch appeared in the scientific world....
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Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
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Oof, this happen probably when I worked this article and
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spotted a male Corsican nuthatch and shot the individual.
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Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
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