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75: 21: 219: 198: 150: 167: 229: 554: 99: 702: 848: 825: 632: 569:. I concur with ALT0 as all but one TV transmitter that serves the area rebroadcasts a Utah station, but there's one very fun exception that I can see why you missed. Assigned to Colorado City was K27EJ (now K27EJ-D), which in the 1997 TV Factbook (also p. B-173) is listed as rebroadcasting KTVK of Phoenix. It now rebroadcasts 573:, probably because there is no Fox station from Salt Lake rebroadcast there. I have placed the necessary reference—a specialized table produced by the FCC—to support this. Without additional citations, ALT0, 2, 4, 5, and 6 are approved now, and the others just need either an additional citation or a hook wording fix. 897:
There might be details about the trails themselves, but I've done about as much searching for information as not living in the area allows. Would be appropriate to remove some of the details of the nurse's accident (perhaps to be more equal with the coverage of the similar accident?) - of course, it
524:: A surprising number of potential hooks for a relatively short article (though alt0/4, alt1/7s and alt5/6 are pairs kind of playing on the same thing, in different ways). Alt6 is a play on the road name. Alt2 is based on a fairly-successful hook that ran for 516: 861:"In Cane Beds, there are pronghorns and mule deer, and there is land suitable for agriculture." Something about the wording of this feels awkward and it could probably use elaboration anyway, as it's its own paragraph. 890:
feels overly lengthy given the section's size. Rather than shorten it, I suggest seeing if any other information about tourism can be found to make the section longer overall to balance it a little.
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I would like to see citations on the sentences with the "Virgin Bottoms" moniker for ALT1/a and Shinarump for ALT7/a. ALT3 I'd consider changing to "LDS Church" per
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Calling someone without a WP article a "notable resident" seems like bit of a stretch, even more so when you specify that they only lived there briefly.
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is entirely in Arizona, many of its services – including a medical center, airport, and television – are in Utah?
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was initially merged with a school district serving a different state because it didn't have enough students?
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on Knowledge (XXG). If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below.
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The second comma seems to be unnecessary in "St. George, Utah, metropolitan area."
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Hmm, I think it's fine as it is after your revisions. Excellent job. --
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is the subject of a lot of the news coverage mentioning the town.
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to honor a dead local man had been requested by the man himself?
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It looks very good already. My only critiques are these:
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I'd rather take ALT1 or ALT1a, if you'd cite it inline?
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and moved to the top, as is standard for any article.
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That's all I've spotted. Lead is fine. Good work. --
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New enough and large enough expansion. QPQ present.
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