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Talk:Church murals in Sweden/GA1

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Around 1250, there is a stylistic shift towards Gothic style. The composition of the murals becomes lighter and more airy, while some iconographic changes can be observed. Marian themes and Christian mysticism become more
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Church murals or church wall paintings are decorative paintings, mostly medieval, found in several Swedish churches where they adorn the vaults or walls of the buildings.
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Around 1250, there was a stylistic shift towards Gothic that saw lighter and more airy compositions and the rising popularity of Marian and Christian mystic motifs.
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The chancel arch could also contain images of saints or donor portraits. Sometimes a depiction of the Passion was painted above the chancel arch.
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In many cases, only fragments remain. The remains that do exist constitute only a small portion of the original works.
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make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary.
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The Nominator(s) should understand that I am a grammar pedant, and I will nitpick in the interest of prose quality.
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Delete "the surface of". The alternative to the surface would make the painting impossible to perceive.
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I may be mistaken but doesn't "was" here refer to "The entire church" rather than "walls and vaults"?
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when wooden church ceilings and barrel vaults began to be replaced by groin vaults.
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The only known Romanesque murals north of Lake Mälaren are in Romfartuna Church.
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This is made redundant by the first sentence of the section (and paragraph).
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Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the
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This is redundant; paintings always cover the painted surface.
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The murals tend to cover all or most of the painted surface
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or on the surface of the underside of the chancel arch.
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Combine, change to past-tense, and condense. Consider:
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Nothing further is however known about these artists.
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