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Detainment for legitimate quarantine is still technically a form of detainment, I can see how it would be unclear. How about this: "He was last heard from on 6 February 2020; as of May 2020, his whereabouts remain unknown. The
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Given the news of Li's resurfacing, I think this sentence "Republican lawmakers in the U.S. have called for an inquiry..." should now read, "Republican lawmakers in the U.S. called for an inquiry..." I also think it should be mentioned that Li states he was quarantined during his disappearance.
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I'm not sure what you mean by second-hand sources in this context. The WP:RS quote the
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I think this needs to specify who is the direct source of this information. It appears it is either his friend or his mother. If the authorities have made any known statements about Chen's disappearance, source that. Otherwise, make it clear that the information is
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