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Could you create more consistency with punctuation placement - in or out of quotation marks. Last I checked, even with AmEng articles the tendency is to use logical punctuation and keep it outside quotation marks. This is mostly adhered to, but in some places (mostly in
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I chose "à la" because it's closest to my intended meaning (like, "in the style of"—same format, same time interval, etc.). It's more specific than "like" or "akin to", but I can change it to one of those if you feel
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After "Amber Martin", I don't think the "there" is necessary - where else would it be talking about? If the sentence feels incomplete, "at the club" would work as a replacement (and IMO reads better anyway).
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Include terminal punctuation within the quotation marks only if it was present in the original material, and otherwise place it after the closing quotation mark.
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Thank you! I always seem to miss a pesky curly apostrophe or two. I've put the period back inside the quotation marks per
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Accordingly, I've put the punctuation inside when it was in the source material and outside when it wasn't.
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Good amount of images, quotation boxes also used. Good, but any more and it may seem overloaded.
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on hold Well written, tight to the subject with good detail. A few minor things to address.
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