604:
580:
566:
535:
511:
484:
474:
449:
435:
421:
390:
376:
198:
This is a very good article, but it is a very complex read for the general reader. I think there should be more context for the terms in the text, especially as the wikilinks go to complexly-worded articles. So much use of technical terms without explanation is
273:
I got the impression from your edits that it was largely the "Lifestyle" section that was the problem, so this section has now been expanded to include description of more basic fungal biology. Are there any other sections you think need more help?
172:
Wikilinks should occur at the first mention of the term, and then repeated if you feel it is necessary later in the article. For example, fruiting body is not wikilinked in the lead, but is somewhere in the
252:
This is a fascinating article, but it is still way too filled with jargon. If you could expand the article some to include an explanation of the jargon, the reader would benefit immensely. —
212:
I went through the article again and made numerous changes which I hope makes it more user-friendly; let me know if there's anything else you feel needs tweaking. Thanks for another review!
156:
I checked the original source to make sure, and they basically meant widely distributed around the world except for tropical regions, so I just switched "circumpolar" to "widespread".
66:
62:
110:
47:
106:
355:
349:
39:
558:
441:
382:
407:
102:
55:
17:
628:
329:
297:
261:
238:
128:
98:
306:
Does the "Lifecycle" section read better? What are the other sections you want me to work on?
548:
311:
279:
217:
200:
187:
161:
85:
32:
147:
wikilinked but it goes to a disambig page that is not helpful in explaining what you mean.
119:
Hi, I am reviewing this article for GA. I have a few comments which I will leave below. —
93:
497:
620:
572:
321:
289:
253:
230:
120:
427:
307:
275:
213:
183:
157:
144:
632:
333:
315:
301:
283:
265:
242:
221:
191:
165:
132:
114:
89:
373:: The editor has worked to make this technical article accessible
320:
Yes, it is much better. I think the article is fine now. —
74:
43:
288:
I can edit only the sections that I semi-understand. —
8:
557:(images are tagged and non-free images have
616:A fascinating article. Congratulations!
7:
552:, where possible and appropriate.
24:
602:
578:
564:
533:
509:
506:Fair representation without bias
482:
472:
447:
433:
419:
388:
374:
92:, so the review is indexed from
471:: Covers major relevant areas
203:and violates a GA requirement.
1:
115:18:23, 27 February 2023 (UTC)
603:
579:
565:
534:
510:
483:
473:
448:
434:
420:
389:
375:
481:: Remains focused on topic
432:: The sources are reliable
648:
633:22:27, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
334:22:22, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
316:22:08, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
302:21:50, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
284:21:36, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
266:21:08, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
243:00:00, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
222:04:59, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
192:04:59, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
166:04:59, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
133:00:00, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
84:Note: this review was for
585:Wonderful illustrations.
88:, which was merged with
364:reasonably well written
571:(appropriate use with
546:It is illustrated by
498:neutral point of view
462:broad in its coverage
18:Talk:Crucibulum laeve
559:fair use rationales
418:: Well referenced
403:factually accurate
573:suitable captions
530:No edit wars etc.
639:
625:
606:
605:
582:
581:
568:
567:
537:
536:
513:
512:
486:
485:
476:
475:
451:
450:
437:
436:
428:reliable sources
423:
422:
392:
391:
378:
377:
326:
294:
258:
235:
125:
86:Crucibulum laeve
79:
70:
51:
647:
646:
642:
641:
640:
638:
637:
636:
621:
495:It follows the
469:(major aspects)
322:
290:
254:
231:
121:
94:Talk:Crucibulum
60:
37:
31:
29:
22:
21:
20:
12:
11:
5:
645:
643:
614:
613:
612:
611:
610:
609:
590:
589:
588:
587:
586:
544:
543:
542:
541:
540:
520:
519:
518:
517:
516:
493:
492:
491:
490:
489:
458:
457:
456:
455:
454:
426:(citations to
399:
398:
397:
396:
395:
387:: Follows MoS
358:for criteria)
345:
344:
343:
342:
341:
340:
339:
338:
337:
336:
250:
249:
227:
226:
225:
224:
207:
206:
205:
204:
195:
194:
177:
176:
175:
174:
169:
168:
151:
150:
149:
148:
139:
80:
28:
25:
23:
15:
14:
13:
10:
9:
6:
4:
3:
2:
644:
635:
634:
630:
626:
624:
617:
608:
607:
600:
597:
596:
594:
591:
584:
583:
576:
574:
562:
560:
554:
553:
551:
550:
545:
539:
538:
531:
528:
527:
525:
521:
515:
514:
507:
504:
503:
501:
499:
494:
488:
487:
480:
470:
466:
465:
463:
459:
453:
452:
445:
443:
431:
429:
417:
413:
412:
410:
409:
404:
400:
394:
393:
386:
384:
372:
368:
367:
365:
361:
360:
359:
357:
353:
351:
335:
331:
327:
325:
319:
318:
317:
313:
309:
305:
304:
303:
299:
295:
293:
287:
286:
285:
281:
277:
272:
271:
270:
269:
268:
267:
263:
259:
257:
247:
246:
245:
244:
240:
236:
234:
223:
219:
215:
211:
210:
209:
208:
202:
197:
196:
193:
189:
185:
181:
180:
179:
178:
171:
170:
167:
163:
159:
155:
154:
153:
152:
146:
142:
141:
140:
137:
136:
135:
134:
130:
126:
124:
117:
116:
112:
108:
104:
100:
99:Mike Christie
97:
95:
91:
87:
81:
78:
77:
73:
68:
64:
59:
58:
54:
49:
45:
41:
36:
35:
26:
19:
622:
618:
615:
598:
592:
570:
556:
547:
529:
523:
505:
496:
478:
468:
461:
439:
425:
416:(references)
415:
406:
402:
380:
370:
363:
347:
346:
323:
291:
255:
251:
232:
228:
122:
118:
83:
82:
75:
71:
57:Article talk
56:
52:
33:
30:
145:circumpolar
44:visual edit
408:verifiable
90:Crucibulum
599:Pass/Fail
479:(focused)
201:WP:JARGON
143:You have
27:GA Review
623:Mattisse
446:: No OR
324:Mattisse
292:Mattisse
256:Mattisse
248:Comments
233:Mattisse
138:Comments
123:Mattisse
107:contribs
593:Overall
508:: NPOV
371:(prose)
182:Fixed.
111:library
67:history
48:history
34:Article
549:images
524:stable
522:It is
500:policy
460:It is
401:It is
362:It is
352:review
348:Final
308:Sasata
276:Sasata
214:Sasata
184:Sasata
173:body.'
158:Sasata
354:(see
76:Watch
16:<
629:Talk
405:and
356:here
330:Talk
312:talk
298:Talk
280:talk
262:Talk
239:Talk
218:talk
188:talk
162:talk
129:Talk
103:talk
63:edit
40:edit
383:MoS
109:-
631:)
601::
595::
577::
569:b
563::
555:a
532::
526:.
502:.
477:b
467:a
464:.
442:OR
438:c
424:b
414:a
411:.
379:b
369:a
366:.
350:GA
332:)
314:)
300:)
282:)
264:)
241:)
220:)
190:)
164:)
131:)
113:)
105:-
65:|
46:|
42:|
627:(
619:—
575:)
561:)
444:)
440:(
430:)
385:)
381:(
328:(
310:(
296:(
278:(
260:(
237:(
229:—
216:(
186:(
160:(
127:(
101:(
96:.
72:·
69:)
61:(
53:·
50:)
38:(
Text is available under the Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike License. Additional terms may apply.