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Talk:Croatian patrol boat Šolta (OB-02)/GA1

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17–18 November means it was towed during the night of 17–18 November; the Šibenik overhauling shipyard is actually very close. You are correct about the 20 mm gun. I actually mentioned it in the article (M-75 on the stern) but made a typo by listing it as a 40 mm. Thanks for the script; I installed
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No problem. Re. the "night of" situation, I believe the MOS recommends a forward slash for the two days (17/18) so I made that change. That raises the question of "the night of 15 November" -- was it definitely just the 15th or did the operation go past midnight? If the former, I would avoid
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confusion by saying "the evening of 15 November"; if the latter, it should be "the night of 15/16 November". Anyway, I'll leave you to take care of that and will pass this as GA now -- well done! Cheers,
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it and fixed the citation issues. Made my life a whole lot easier. Also, access dates have been added and the duplicated references have been removed. Thank you for your
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itself was left adrift" is cited to the same two references, so there's no particular need to duplicate the citations after "Battle of the Dalmatian Channels".
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Haven't reviewed a patrol boat -- or a Croatian Navy -- article before, so something new... ;-) Will aim to complete in the next few days. Cheers,
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Alan Agency suggested a 20 mm cannon in the armament but the article doesn't mention this.
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I'd include access dates for the news reports and other web sources.
231:-- Appears logical and in line with other ship articles I've seen. 281: 134: 103: 8: 30: 203:, everything from "In November 1991" to " 246:You have several Harv errors -- install 61: 33: 18:Talk:Croatian patrol boat Šolta (OB-02) 224:Also checked Brodarski -- no concerns. 221:Wertheim also mentions a 20 mm weapon. 7: 314:Done. Thank you for your review.-- 24: 1: 185:No dab or EL issues reported. 324:12:59, 30 January 2014 (UTC) 310:22:50, 29 January 2014 (UTC) 294:14:37, 27 January 2014 (UTC) 270:07:04, 27 January 2014 (UTC) 175:23:33, 21 January 2014 (UTC) 161:23:33, 21 January 2014 (UTC) 342: 199:In the first para of 235:Supporting materials 212:Comprehensiveness 89: 88: 333: 139: 130: 111: 43:Copyvio detector 31: 341: 340: 336: 335: 334: 332: 331: 330: 277: 250:to detect them. 120: 97: 91: 85: 57: 29: 22: 21: 20: 12: 11: 5: 339: 337: 329: 328: 327: 326: 276: 273: 255: 254: 251: 226: 225: 222: 219: 209: 208: 197: 187: 186: 140: 87: 86: 84: 83: 78: 73: 67: 64: 63: 59: 58: 56: 55: 53:External links 50: 45: 39: 36: 35: 28: 25: 23: 15: 14: 13: 10: 9: 6: 4: 3: 2: 338: 325: 321: 317: 313: 312: 311: 307: 303: 298: 297: 296: 295: 291: 287: 283: 274: 272: 271: 267: 263: 259: 252: 249: 245: 244: 243: 242: 238: 236: 232: 230: 223: 220: 217: 216: 215: 213: 206: 202: 198: 195: 194: 193: 191: 184: 183: 182: 181: 180:Toolbox check 177: 176: 172: 168: 163: 162: 158: 155: 152: 148: 145: 141: 138: 137: 133: 128: 124: 119: 118: 114: 109: 105: 101: 96: 95: 82: 79: 77: 74: 72: 69: 68: 66: 65: 60: 54: 51: 49: 46: 44: 41: 40: 38: 37: 32: 26: 19: 278: 257: 256: 240: 239: 234: 233: 228: 227: 211: 210: 204: 200: 189: 188: 179: 178: 164: 153: 143: 142: 135: 131: 117:Article talk 116: 112: 93: 90: 81:Instructions 248:this script 241:Referencing 190:Prose/style 104:visual edit 48:Authorship 34:GA toolbox 229:Structure 144:Reviewer: 71:Templates 62:Reviewing 27:GA Review 302:Ian Rose 275:Comments 262:Ian Rose 167:Ian Rose 157:contribs 147:Ian Rose 76:Criteria 284:. :-)-- 258:Summary 201:Service 127:history 108:history 94:Article 316:Saxum 286:Saxum 282:edits 205:Mukos 136:Watch 16:< 320:talk 306:talk 290:talk 266:talk 171:talk 151:talk 123:edit 100:edit 322:) 308:) 292:) 268:) 173:) 159:) 125:| 106:| 102:| 318:( 304:( 288:( 264:( 169:( 154:· 149:( 132:· 129:) 121:( 113:· 110:) 98:(

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