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They actually still exist, but they aren't the main entrance to the annex. There's a set of double doors with an awning to the west of that. Unfortunately, I can't find a source for that, and "personal observation" and "Google Street View" aren't acceptable sources. But you can see it
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of the annex. It could be 75,000 square feet is the amount of usable space (excluding mechanical areas) but I can't find a source to confirm this yet.
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Do you know when/why they stopped lighting up the building at night? (discussions of lights have all been in the past tense)
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Hm, yeah I also see something akin to a revolving door in the image of the
Guttman CC front. Anyways, tense fix looks good.
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