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Lemonade51, thanks for the review. I believe I've addressed your concerns and added a little more from recent events, although it's worth bearing in mind that this is an article about Simpson, not the 2013 America's Cup so I didn't go too crazy. Let me know what you think. Cheers.
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The additions are fine -- it doesn't go off on a tangent, which is the main thing. Made minor tweaks with some references. Will pass now, nice job. :)
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