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Bubbling Under is indicative of not being commercially successful either. Basically means that not a lot of people bought it. You don't need to sell a lot to chart high on the component rock chart because it's such a minor genre amongst the rest such as pop, R&B, dance etc. I suggest that you reword it to say that while it achieved success on the rock chart, peaking at number two, it did not replicate it's success on other charts. There's nothing wrong with that, and it doesn't show bias. —
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How is "It was the last song written for the album, and nearly did not make it on there at all" fan-written? No question, I love this band, but there's no hint of bias in that statement, and it's purely factual. The source for it is behind the next sentence, which is common to do in
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The song was certainly commercially successful. It was a number two hit on the standard alt-rock chart in the States, which means it received tons of radio airplay (also evidenced by the BDS certified award I reference). Whether or not it was a hit on the Hot 100 is irrelevant. Perhaps compared to
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I think I'll give input on this one (I was the one who added the source in the first place). The article is about the top music videos of alternative rock songs, as said in the article's title, and the song is in the list, so I wouldn't say it's not mentioned. Also, if you listen to the song, this
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Many of the reviews quoted in the critical reception section give you an idea of why critics considered it a more "serious" song. For example, this: " hints at the emotional maturity they'd show on later releases, especially 2003's self-titled album," or it's "rare departure from the usual Blink
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Look at any GA song/album article, for example. It's impossible to source a synopsis for every video. As long as you aren't bias or fancrufty, it's fine. Of course, branding and name-dropping would require sources. And if you can find any, then of course still use them.
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I'm not commenting on the amount of sources present. I'm saying that controversy usually garners a lot of attention, and there isn't really that much prose. I'm asking whether there could potentially be more. Have you looked in books and journals etc.?
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The controversy section has seven sources. I believe that is more than enough to prove that it was controversial at that time. How many "Student's suicide set to song" articles from Denver-related newspapers do I need?
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It's the "at all" part which makes it sound fan written. You don't need that bit; 'and nearly did not make it is' is indicative of being 'at all', it's just puffed up. Don't use 10 words when you can use 5.
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The source for alternative rock is titled "Top 10 Alt-Rock Videos". I didn't add that, but I felt it fine enough to leave. It's also worth noting a sentence from that article: "Blink-182 got serious..."
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In late 1997 and early 1998, the band would be on the road for nine months straight, only coming home to San Diego for days at a time before striking out on the next tour. → This reads a bit fan written.
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the previous single it wasn't as big, but I'm confident most people would consider a top five hit on any music chart to be some measure of success. And no, it wasn't certified, and yes, I've checked.
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