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If you are using "Ghaznavid Empire" in the lead, make sure you use the same in the prose instead of "Ghaznavid dynasty" and "Ghaznavid kingdom".
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Saw the ping and this looks interesting. I will complete my review in 24 hours.
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You have all the time in the world as long as you keep in touch :)
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147:Yash!
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