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Thanks for reviewing the article. I’ve addressed all of the aforementioned issues and have taken your helpful suggestions. I don't have full access to the
Kennedy book that you've recommended, so please send those relevant passages. Cheers,
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I've made a first pass, looks really good. I've highlighted any issues I found, and made a few suggestions, above. Cheers,
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