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The nominator has not edited on Knowledge since late June, the article itself hasn't been edited since early May, and the reviewer has just retired from Knowledge. Given the issues raised in the review, I am closing this nomination; the article is not being listed. Should the nominator return, I
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for an example of the coverage expected of a relationship of this type. I will place this article on hold to allow for improvements, please feel free to improve this as the nominator appears to be somewhat inactive.
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I'm concerned that this lead does not appropriately summarize the articles contents. For example, the lead does not discuss any of the treaties or trade policies between the countries.
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Agreement between the Republic of Croatia and the Republic of Armenia for the avoidance of double taxation and the prevention of fiscal evasion with respect to taxes on income
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This section also needs expansion with prose. For example, what are the conditions of trade between the two countries, what goods are being traded etc...
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Overall this article will need significant expansion and copyediting to reach GA status. I suggest looking at
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The circumstances surrounding the recognition of Croatia by Armenia could use expansion and clarification
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The last sentence here needs additional articles and an "and" at the end of the list of organizations.
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I understand that the nominator is somewhat inactive, but I'm going to give this review a shot.
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suggest addressing all the issues raised in the review and consider completing a
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Are these the only four high level visits between the two countries?
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The first paragraph flows very poorly and is not well written
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The introduction of more images would also be helpful.
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