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in 1975 but the title doesn't make that clear at all. Secondly, the current title might unintentionally seem to suggest to the casual reader some kind of direct military involvement, when of course that would be inaccurate. The suggested title above seems as good as anything I could come up with, although I'd imagine that there would be a range of variations along those lines that would also be workable.
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Australia was feeding intelligence to Indonesia about Portugal, in order to minimise misunderstanding about the toe." What does "the toe" refer to? Is this possibly a typo? Does it possibly mean "about the
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Indonesian occupation of East Timor" might be more appropriate, I think. Anyway, I will ping a few of the usual suspects who tend to have better
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