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Let me know if you find anything in the magazine. There aren't critics for this type of thing?
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Hello. I'll be doing the GA review for this article. Here's some suggestions for improvement:
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Critics? For video game (nay, visual novel) characters? Not that I know of.--
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All the paragraphs in the lead begin with "Ayu". Can it be mixed up a bit?
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