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Likewise here "...received a battery of 75mm pack howitzers on 3 March..." and here "...six of these units were equipped with 105mm howitzers and the other two operated 155mm howitzers..." and here "...and eight batteries of 90mm anti-aircraft guns..."? (i.e. wikilinks)
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I've linked these where possible, but there are several different types of 15 cm howitzers and 7.5 cm mountain guns to choose from and the source is unspecific about what type they were - and given the IJA's practices they realistically could have been of any type.
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Given the amount of text which passes between the general being introduced and his name being used to open a paragraph, I think that this is OK - just the last name looks a bit odd in this context.
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I know it must be hard but try to look after yourself mate (and everybody else can go get stuffed in my book). Anyway passing now as there is nothing else to cover off on by my count.
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Glad to help of cse. All those changes look fine to me. I'll give AR a chance to look it over and make any changes / cmts but this looks fine to me.
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foreboding today and all I see before me are those no longer here. Sorry. Regards,
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