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The first two are sourced and established as common names in the lead sentence; is there an issue with using them as synonyms? As for the last one, the establishment is never referred to as "Washington
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for this establishment. "Corona pandemic" and "COVID pandemic", though descriptive and clear, are not COMMONNAMEs for the COVID-19 pandemic. RS don't typically use that language. I can make this change if you prefer, but I don't believe there's anything in the MOS against the use of established,
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So in the infobox, you cited some stuff: the owners, and dates. In my common practice this is not needed, as the body has already said it. The infobox is a supplement to the lead, so should be treated like a lead, that doesn't need citation when it doesn't.
341:"The bar's September 2018 debut was met with concern that it would contribute to gentrification of the area, but its approval was straightforward, and the venue proved to be popular, with praise for its comfortable, welcoming atmosphere."
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article. We can't switch from calling it "COVID-19 pandemic" to "COVID pandemic" to "corona pandemic" all the time. If calling it "Boxers
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has some "n.a."s in the non-free rationale box; since it's fillable I'd recommend filling it. Author parameter should probably also be filled in. This is so that I can tick up criterion 6a in the progress box.
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Since there's still no article on Boxers NYC (and even if there is one), it should be briefly established what Boxers NYC is. The name itself is vulnerable to wrong assumptions.
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I'll be reviewing this! Same old usual: if I don't talk about it, that means it's all good. One thing I notice is the lack of images: I'd love an image of the place itself.
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The article constantly changes its referral of the establishment, from "Boxers
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I often see certain facts, such as these, cited in the infobox as well, but it doesn't really matter. I've removed the citations per your request.
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