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I appreciate your desire to help, but I promise you I have a vision for this article that will be fulfilled. I hope I don't sound rude saying so, but it would be easier if you didn't assist. Most of what you changed was what I intended. I should be finished reforming it soon. Again, I'm not trying to
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Checked again; you are right that it was the Dutch East India company. I replaced several mentions, although I don't think it would be completely inappropriate to use the word Dutch a few times, as long as it's clear enough that it refers to the the Dutch East India
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Portugal's exploitation of the division between Hindus and Muslims, as well as the reformed government it introduced, which attempted to impose Catholicism, create a singular currency, and monopolise the spice trade, had led to its economic decline and loss of the status it once held
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the same in all regions, and should be sublisted separately in each region: intermunicipal entities are sometimes larger and split by subregions (e.g. the
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