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I found that viscosity was only really emphasized in the article lead. I took the opportunity to expand this paragraph to cover physical properties generally (density plus viscosity) with comparisons to other materials and suitable supporting cites. I think this paragraph stands on its own
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this article currently has several major issues that need to be fixed before it meets the GA criteria. I will be putting the article
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