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The source supports only that they started performing at the Beacon annually in 1996, not that they stopped performing in 2014. Additionally, the 2014 date is mentioned later on in the paragraph.
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Nitpick, but I think the caption for the infobox image should just be "Beacon Theatre marquee in 2003" as the image metadata does not actually verify that the image was taken
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I don't know how this ended up in the article, but yes, some theaters have movable stages that are basically huge elevators. I've removed this now.
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is a better image for the infobox as it more clearly shows the theater's exterior, and is more technically adept.
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just says that the theater was closed for more than a year; it doesn't explicitly say it closed in March 2020.
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Done, though I also rephrased the first part of the sentence to make this grammatically correct.
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It is already linked both in the lead and in the second paragraph of the "Description" section.
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it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
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spells the name of the Yiddish vaudeville as "Bagels & Yox", not "Bagels & Vox".
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Thanks for the detailed review. I have addressed all of issues you've brought up now.
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it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each
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I spot-checked a dozen or so of the citations, only found three minor issues:
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The article says "The Beacon Theatre closed temporarily in March 2020", but
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Warner Bros. owned 75 percent" → "in which Warner Bros. owned 75 percent"
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it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing
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would operate" (unless I'm missing something, Roxy refers to a person)
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I've replaced the infobox image and adjusted the caption accordingly.
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goes at the bottom of the article, not in the "See also" section.
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a concert by the Pretenders as the current caption claims.
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understandable to an appropriately broad audience
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