256:
80:
53:
485:
461:
180:
495:
22:
591:? Believe me, I am not related to the company behind. I just like this drink and prefer it to Coca Cola or whatever else, as long as it is organic and naturally brewed. I also find it's history rather interesting, and they are going to expand to the US market as well. That's why I started this article. What exactly can be described as "written like an advertisement."?
90:
728:
gaining market shares. This exagerates the facts. That Miller lite is one of the beers that is becoming popular in
Germany is simply not true, despite the citation form Time magazin. I have been around Germany a lot and know this from experience. You'll be hard pressed to find a bar or shop that offers any American beer.
658:
I still thought it was quite a PR piece so I tried to reorganize. I did not remove (except the word "independent" for the reviews on the ???bev site) but only moved text, and added the actual ingredients so people can see the promotion story is exaggerating the organicness and the healthiness. Oh and
765:
Yes thank you
Anastrophe. Time is a popular news source, but their news must still be verifiable. Time does not cite where the information comes from and I have not been able to find another source that confirms their statement that Miller and Corona are taking over the German market. On the other
727:
I changed the text:"He was worried about the future of the company, which was about to go bankrupt, as import beers like Corona were taking away market shares from domestic producers.", since in
Germany the domestic market is not being taken over by imported beers, but rather imported beers are
683:
Bionade's innovative brewing process converts the malt sugar into gluconic acid instead of alcohol. This is a natural ingredient of bee honey and is considered to be very healthy. Because gluconic acid strengthens the taste of natural sugar, Bionade needs only a fraction of the sugar found in a
843:. If you find this addition an error, Kindly undo the changes and update the inappropriate categories if needed. The bot was instructed to tagg these articles upon consenus from WikiProject Food and drink. You can find the related request for tagging
150:
799:
good point. the source mentions that the uptake of magnesium inhibits the uptake of calcium and vice versa. I deleted the section, since this does not seem like very relevant information but more like an
889:
405:
project banner to food and drink related articles and content to help bring them to the attention of members. For a complete list of banners for WikiProject Food and drink and its child projects,
188:
63:
419:
384:
243:
840:
879:
140:
406:
413:
847:. Maximum and carefull attention was done to avoid any wrongly tagging any categories , but mistakes may happen... If you have concerns , please inform on the
688:
Unless there's a source for this text, I propose to delete it. This page already appears to have a very biased POV, and this text would just make it worse.
884:
641:
thank You! Copyediting grammar/syntax is absolutely fine. I am not a native english-speaker, there may be mistakes or unusual constructions in some phrases.
848:
116:
565:
899:
874:
555:
767:
266:
103:
58:
193:
904:
894:
541:
517:
844:
829:
747:
the factual accuracy of your experiences. wikipedia relies upon verifiable information - Time magazine is verifiable, you are not.
508:
466:
33:
115:
related articles on
Knowledge (XXG). If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
395:
795:
I'm not a chemist, but from what I remember, it doesn't make sense. What is that "cancel out" supposed to mean?
437:
856:
768:
http://www.bild.de/BTO/tipps-trends/geld-job/2007/08/09/bier-liste/beliebte-marken-deutschland,geo=2283880.html
39:
632:
excellent. thank you kindly! i'm going to do some minor copyediting for grammar/syntax, hope you don't mind.
614:
601:
the entire "Product" section reads like a promotional brochure. it is not written in an encyclopedic manner.
752:
516:
on
Knowledge (XXG). If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
613:. But I've re-written this part now. I've also find out that the "advertising" text was copyvio from
21:
852:
804:
771:
729:
660:
391:
808:
775:
733:
766:
hand, BILD, a popular German daily paper does not even list Miller in the top ten beers sold (
710:
693:
664:
289:
255:
818:
547:
748:
633:
602:
770:), so saying that Miller and Corona are taking over the German market is simply not true.
500:
348:
744:
79:
52:
868:
836:
706:
705:
This page looks much better now, and the offending statements have been remedied.
689:
642:
616:
592:
314:
793:"calcium and magnesium, in such quantities that they do not cancel each other out"
374:
95:
679:
I challenge the factual basis for this statement, added by editor 68junior88:
490:
484:
460:
85:
318:
179:
513:
89:
326:
390:
Delete unrelated trivia sections found in articles. Please review
370:
352:
322:
306:
302:
298:
112:
378:
344:
310:
294:
108:
860:
812:
779:
756:
743:
the problem is, we don't know who you are, and have no way to
737:
714:
697:
668:
645:
636:
619:
605:
595:
550:
in the banner shell. Please resolve this conflict if possible.
546:
This article has been given a rating which conflicts with the
15:
178:
611:
610:
Well, that was my guess... I didn't write most of that
588:
233:
228:
223:
218:
890:
Start-Class articles with conflicting quality ratings
825:
This article talk page was automatically added with
512:, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
107:, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
191:, a task force which is currently considered to be
161:
414:Category:Knowledge (XXG) requested images of food
8:
455:
206:
158:
125:Knowledge (XXG):WikiProject Food and drink
47:
187:This article is within the scope of the
457:
49:
19:
880:Low-importance Food and drink articles
7:
506:This article is within the scope of
101:This article is within the scope of
885:WikiProject Food and drink articles
526:Knowledge (XXG):WikiProject Germany
412:Provide photographs and images for
263:Here are some tasks you can do for
128:Template:WikiProject Food and drink
38:It is of interest to the following
548:project-independent quality rating
14:
493:
483:
459:
418:Consider joining this project's
254:
88:
78:
51:
20:
900:Low-importance Germany articles
875:C-Class Food and drink articles
560:This article has been rated as
440:from the project's tasks pages.
383:Participate in project-related
145:This article has been rated as
403:{{WikiProject Food and drink}}
1:
698:00:53, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
520:and see a list of open tasks.
119:and see a list of open tasks.
905:WikiProject Germany articles
895:Start-Class Germany articles
675:Factual basis for statements
646:19:36, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
637:16:16, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
620:14:31, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
606:02:40, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
596:19:53, 27 October 2007 (UTC)
529:Template:WikiProject Germany
715:22:28, 9 January 2008 (UTC)
921:
830:WikiProject Food and drink
819:WikiProject Food and drink
813:09:07, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
780:16:22, 21 March 2008 (UTC)
757:16:46, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
738:16:42, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
566:project's importance scale
267:WikiProject Food and drink
241:To edit this page, select
151:project's importance scale
104:WikiProject Food and drink
835:banner as it falls under
669:17:59, 19 July 2008 (UTC)
559:
545:
478:
210:Food and Drink task list:
205:
186:
157:
144:
73:
46:
861:17:26, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
841:one of its subcategories
398:to learn how to do this.
131:Food and drink articles
686:
436:Note: These lists are
361:articles currently at
335:articles currently at
283:Status or below up to
183:
28:This article is rated
788:calcium and magnesium
681:
420:Assessment task force
182:
32:on Knowledge (XXG)'s
659:I wasn't logged in.
385:deletion discussions
189:Beverages Task Force
509:WikiProject Germany
279:articles currently
162:Related taskforces:
684:normal soft drink.
396:WP:Handling trivia
290:Agaricus bisporus
184:
34:content assessment
849:project talk page
580:
579:
576:
575:
572:
571:
454:
453:
450:
449:
446:
445:
433:
432:
293:(i.e. mushroom),
275:Help bring these
201:
200:
912:
834:
828:
723:Factual Accuracy
534:
533:
532:Germany articles
530:
527:
524:
503:
498:
497:
496:
487:
480:
479:
474:
471:
463:
456:
441:
258:
250:
249:
207:
169:
159:
133:
132:
129:
126:
123:
98:
93:
92:
82:
75:
74:
69:
66:
55:
48:
31:
25:
24:
16:
920:
919:
915:
914:
913:
911:
910:
909:
865:
864:
832:
826:
823:
790:
725:
677:
585:
531:
528:
525:
522:
521:
499:
494:
492:
472:
469:
442:
435:
429:
426:in this section
359:High Importance
259:
238:
167:
130:
127:
124:
121:
120:
94:
87:
67:
61:
29:
12:
11:
5:
918:
916:
908:
907:
902:
897:
892:
887:
882:
877:
867:
866:
853:TinucherianBot
822:
816:
802:
801:
789:
786:
785:
784:
783:
782:
760:
759:
724:
721:
720:
719:
718:
717:
676:
673:
672:
671:
655:
654:
653:
652:
651:
650:
649:
648:
625:
624:
623:
622:
584:
581:
578:
577:
574:
573:
570:
569:
562:Low-importance
558:
552:
551:
544:
538:
537:
535:
518:the discussion
505:
504:
501:Germany portal
488:
476:
475:
473:Low‑importance
464:
452:
451:
448:
447:
444:
443:
434:
431:
430:
428:
427:
416:
410:
399:
388:
381:
355:
349:French cuisine
333:Top Importance
329:
277:Top Importance
272:
261:
260:
253:
248:
247:
237:
236:
231:
226:
221:
215:
212:
211:
203:
202:
199:
198:
185:
175:
174:
172:
170:
164:
163:
155:
154:
147:Low-importance
143:
137:
136:
134:
122:Food and drink
117:the discussion
100:
99:
83:
71:
70:
68:Low‑importance
59:Food and drink
56:
44:
43:
37:
26:
13:
10:
9:
6:
4:
3:
2:
917:
906:
903:
901:
898:
896:
893:
891:
888:
886:
883:
881:
878:
876:
873:
872:
870:
863:
862:
858:
854:
850:
846:
842:
838:
837:Category:Food
831:
820:
817:
815:
814:
810:
806:
800:advertisment.
798:
797:
796:
794:
787:
781:
777:
773:
769:
764:
763:
762:
761:
758:
754:
750:
746:
742:
741:
740:
739:
735:
731:
722:
716:
712:
708:
704:
703:
702:
701:
700:
699:
695:
691:
685:
680:
674:
670:
666:
662:
657:
656:
647:
644:
640:
639:
638:
635:
631:
630:
629:
628:
627:
626:
621:
618:
615:
612:
609:
608:
607:
604:
600:
599:
598:
597:
594:
590:
582:
567:
563:
557:
554:
553:
549:
543:
540:
539:
536:
519:
515:
511:
510:
502:
491:
489:
486:
482:
481:
477:
468:
465:
462:
458:
439:
425:
424:project ideas
421:
417:
415:
411:
408:
404:
400:
397:
393:
389:
386:
382:
380:
376:
372:
368:
365:status up to
364:
360:
356:
354:
350:
346:
342:
339:status up to
338:
334:
330:
328:
324:
320:
316:
312:
308:
304:
300:
296:
292:
291:
286:
282:
278:
274:
273:
270:
269:
268:
262:
257:
252:
251:
246:
245:
240:
239:
235:
232:
230:
227:
225:
222:
220:
217:
216:
214:
213:
209:
208:
204:
196:
195:
190:
181:
177:
176:
173:
171:
166:
165:
160:
156:
152:
148:
142:
139:
138:
135:
118:
114:
110:
106:
105:
97:
91:
86:
84:
81:
77:
76:
72:
65:
60:
57:
54:
50:
45:
41:
35:
27:
23:
18:
17:
824:
803:
792:
791:
726:
687:
682:
678:
586:
561:
507:
423:
402:
366:
362:
358:
357:Bring these
340:
336:
332:
331:Bring these
315:Ham and eggs
288:
284:
280:
276:
265:
264:
242:
192:
146:
102:
40:WikiProjects
470:Start‑class
438:transcluded
422:. List any
407:select here
375:Burger King
96:Food portal
869:Categories
749:Anastrophe
634:Anastrophe
603:Anastrophe
392:WP:Trivia
319:Soy sauce
287:status:
64:Beverages
805:Weeddude
772:Weeddude
730:Weeddude
401:Add the
369:status:
343:status:
194:inactive
821:Tagging
707:Bry9000
690:Bry9000
661:Arakrys
643:Alex Ex
617:Alex Ex
593:Alex Ex
564:on the
523:Germany
514:Germany
467:Germany
224:history
149:on the
30:C-class
745:verify
583:Advert
327:Yogurt
36:scale.
542:Start
371:Apple
353:Sugar
323:Sushi
307:Drink
303:Curry
299:Bread
234:purge
229:watch
113:drink
857:talk
845:here
809:talk
776:talk
753:talk
734:talk
711:talk
694:talk
665:talk
589:this
587:Why
394:and
379:Fish
345:Beer
311:Food
295:Beef
244:here
219:edit
111:and
109:food
851:--
839:or
556:Low
141:Low
871::
859:)
833:}}
827:{{
811:)
778:)
755:)
736:)
713:)
696:)
667:)
377:,
373:,
367:FA
363:GA
351:,
347:,
341:FA
337:GA
325:,
321:,
317:,
313:,
309:,
305:,
301:,
297:,
285:GA
271::
168:/
62::
855:(
807:(
774:(
751:(
732:(
709:(
692:(
663:(
568:.
409:.
387:.
281:B
197:.
153:.
42::
Text is available under the Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike License. Additional terms may apply.
