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Overall this is an engaging article which boasts a fitting comprehensiveness for an interesting figure. I enjoyed reading through it, and the scientific content was readable for a non-expert like me. I spotted a few minor issues with the prose, but nothing which may hold this article back. I'll leave
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I see that the comments have been addressed - I've looked through the article once more and am content that it meets the GA criteria now. It is written to a good standard, the references all check out and is comprehensive. Well done.
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