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At first glance, the page seems to be well-written, with adequate citations and clear, concise prose. The use of collapsible tables is certainly commendable, as it helps keep the page short. Still, I feel there are too many images in this page which could be reduced to make the page more compact in
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terms of bytes, especially at the transportation section. There is also the image caption on the Penang State Museum which I think needs some sort of citation. But aside from these minor issues, the page (in my opinion) seems ready for GA.
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Aware of this situation, Light formed friendly relations with the then Sultan of Kedah, Sultan Muhammad Jiwa Zainal Adilin II, and promised British military protection, while the Sultan reciprocally offered Penang Island, then part of
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Hey there! Thank you very much for reviewing the George Town article! That's great news after so many months of inactivity, to be entirely honest. As for your suggestions, I will do the necessary edits ASAP.
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You're welcome! :-) I just went through the page one more time. The page is much improved now and it really deserves the GA. Thank you for your efforts on this page and congratulations.
568:, a single point should have up to three citations. However, there are certain sentences in the George Town page where more than three citations can be found. For instance, 83: 32:
Reviewer Semi-auto was a sockpuppet of nominator Vnonymous, so this entire review is illegitimate, and has been belatedly voided once this was discovered, per consensus at
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Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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On top of the other issues regarding excess images, resolving these would put beyond doubt that the page deserves a GA.
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I'm taking this one. I will try to sort out this review within one week. Thanks!
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Remove any excessive, repetitive or irrelevant links.
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Remove excess citations per sentence in accordance to
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Remove excess images at the transportation section.
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Upon further reading, I noticed a few other issues.
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