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559: 533: 499: 446: 422: 400: 378: 345: 315: 293: 226: 202: 262:* I really think the first sentence needs to be more comprehensive in terms of defining the subject. It is a very short sentence and doesn't really provide much information. What about something like "Königsberg was a German light cruiser that was operated between 1929 and April 1940, including service in World War II. She was the lead vessel of her class, and was operated by two German navies, ..." 42: 47: 335:, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). 332: 126: 211: 122: 251: 80: 107: 52: 70: 516: 99: 255: 247: 239: 546: 243: 156: 432: 75: 354: 115: 17: 508: 585:
Thanks for reviewing the article, Peacemaker - your changes all look fine to me, and I made the two corrections you suggested.
520: 324: 159:) 23:50, 31 December 2012 (UTC) I'll review this and the other two Königsberg class cruisers in the next couple of days. 92: 328: 235: 512: 409: 278: 217:* I have done a bit of a c/e of the lead to add wikilinks. Feel free to revert any you don't think are necessary. 459: 387: 604: 164: 150: 590: 608: 594: 485: 481: 265: 168: 542: 489: 600: 301:. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with 160: 146: 302: 179: 436:: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. 586: 408:. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see 458:: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing 264:* I have a query about the format of the article title. According to 134: 103: 212:understandable to an appropriately broad audience 576:, on hold for seven days to address criteria 1b 219:* Spotchecks for copyright problems all clear. 268:Königsberg should be italicised in the title. 8: 30: 172: 61: 33: 7: 214:; spelling and grammar are correct. 210:. the prose is clear, concise, and 24: 557: 531: 497: 444: 420: 398: 376: 343: 313: 291: 224: 200: 333:could reasonably be challenged 18:Talk:German cruiser Königsberg 1: 517:valid non-free use rationales 169:23:50, 31 December 2012 (UTC) 558: 532: 498: 445: 421: 399: 377: 344: 314: 292: 225: 201: 609:23:28, 7 January 2013 (UTC) 595:13:59, 7 January 2013 (UTC) 627: 468: 363: 303:the layout style guideline 272: 187: 174: 469: 364: 273: 188: 178: 175: 545:to the topic, and have 234:. it complies with the 599:No prob, a pleasure. 369:Broad in its coverage 462:or content dispute. 355:no original research 284:no original research 386:. it addresses the 331:. All content that 569:Overall assessment 513:copyright statuses 476:, if possible, by 256:list incorporation 582: 581: 547:suitable captions 519:are provided for 89: 88: 618: 561: 560: 535: 534: 521:non-free content 501: 500: 448: 447: 424: 423: 402: 401: 380: 379: 347: 346: 325:reliable sources 317: 316: 295: 294: 228: 227: 204: 203: 173: 139: 130: 111: 43:Copyvio detector 31: 626: 625: 621: 620: 619: 617: 616: 615: 574:Review complete 238:guidelines for 236:Manual of Style 184:Review Comment 120: 97: 91: 85: 57: 29: 22: 21: 20: 12: 11: 5: 624: 622: 614: 613: 612: 611: 580: 579: 572: 562: 554: 553: 550: 536: 528: 527: 524: 502: 494: 493: 467: 466: 463: 449: 441: 440: 437: 425: 417: 416: 413: 403: 395: 394: 391: 390:of the topic. 381: 373: 372: 362: 361: 358: 353:. it contains 348: 340: 339: 336: 318: 310: 309: 306: 296: 288: 287: 271: 270: 263: 259: 248:words to watch 229: 221: 220: 218: 215: 205: 197: 196: 186: 185: 182: 177: 140: 87: 86: 84: 83: 78: 73: 67: 64: 63: 59: 58: 56: 55: 53:External links 50: 45: 39: 36: 35: 28: 25: 23: 15: 14: 13: 10: 9: 6: 4: 3: 2: 623: 610: 606: 602: 598: 597: 596: 592: 588: 584: 583: 577: 573: 570: 566: 563: 556: 555: 551: 548: 544: 540: 537: 530: 529: 525: 522: 518: 514: 510: 506: 503: 496: 495: 491: 487: 483: 479: 475: 472: 464: 461: 457: 453: 450: 443: 442: 438: 435: 434: 429: 426: 419: 418: 414: 411: 410:summary style 407: 404: 397: 396: 392: 389: 385: 382: 375: 374: 370: 367: 359: 356: 352: 349: 342: 341: 337: 334: 330: 326: 322: 319: 312: 311: 307: 304: 300: 297: 290: 289: 285: 281: 280: 276: 269: 267: 260: 257: 253: 249: 245: 241: 240:lead sections 237: 233: 230: 223: 222: 216: 213: 209: 206: 199: 198: 194: 191: 183: 181: 171: 170: 166: 162: 158: 155: 152: 148: 145: 141: 138: 137: 133: 128: 124: 119: 118: 114: 109: 105: 101: 96: 95: 82: 79: 77: 74: 72: 69: 68: 66: 65: 60: 54: 51: 49: 46: 44: 41: 40: 38: 37: 32: 26: 19: 605:send... over 601:Peacemaker67 575: 568: 564: 541:. media are 538: 507:. media are 504: 477: 473: 470: 455: 451: 431: 427: 405: 388:main aspects 383: 368: 365: 350: 329:cited inline 320: 298: 283: 277: 274: 261: 231: 207: 193:Well-written 192: 189: 165:send... over 161:Peacemaker67 153: 147:Peacemaker67 143: 142: 135: 131: 117:Article talk 116: 112: 93: 90: 81:Instructions 511:with their 474:Illustrated 104:visual edit 279:Verifiable 48:Authorship 34:GA toolbox 587:Parsecboy 266:WP:NCSHIP 180:Attribute 144:Reviewer: 71:Templates 62:Reviewing 27:GA Review 578:Passed. 543:relevant 480:such as 460:edit war 157:contribs 76:Criteria 433:Neutral 252:fiction 127:history 108:history 94:Article 515:, and 509:tagged 482:images 456:Stable 254:, and 244:layout 490:audio 488:, or 486:video 478:media 282:with 176:Rate 136:Watch 16:< 591:talk 327:are 151:talk 123:edit 100:edit 552:OK 526:OK 465:OK 439:OK 415:OK 412:). 393:OK 360:OK 338:OK 308:OK 607:) 593:) 571:. 567:. 549:. 539:6b 523:. 505:6a 492:: 484:, 471:6. 454:. 430:. 406:3b 384:3a 371:: 366:3. 357:. 351:2c 323:. 321:2b 305:. 299:2a 286:: 275:2. 258:. 250:, 246:, 242:, 232:1b 208:1a 195:: 190:1. 167:) 125:| 106:| 102:| 603:( 589:( 565:7 452:5 428:4 163:( 154:· 149:( 132:· 129:) 121:( 113:· 110:) 98:(

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