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Thanks for addressing everything! I've responded twice above and will do some minor edits on my way out, but I'm very happy with this article; it is certainly worthy of GA. Congratulations, this is yours:
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a personal suggestion that can be safely ignored without impacting the review. I'll put it on hold while my comments are addressed, but I expect this to have its green plus in no time!
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What a great read! This is in fantastic shape—the Themes section is especially impressive. Most of my comments are nitpicky so you're welcome to disagree with any of them—and
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The image looks great but its size and placement looks awkward alongside the text; consider replacing with a more recent image of Abbott, like
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The previous order seemed random; I've reordered alphabetically. If there was a specific reason for this order, feel free to revert.
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