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I've changed the tense to past tense. I believe the exterior ornamentation at least has been removed already. As for the interior, the hall is closed permanently; while the individual design features may still be extant for the moment, places like the ballroom will sadly never see activity again. โ€“
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On the gallery, I'm not sure if the second fotos of the Bieves gig or the Golden Festival add much. The scaffolding is also a duplication. So I would suggest moving the front facade foto into the text and deleting the others, but happy to discuss.
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I don't know if they've been demolished. It seems to make sense for me for design and construction to be in the past tense, and descriptions to be in present tense (until we have a source saying it's been demolished). I'm going to defer to
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We already have one picture from each of those events in the article, the front facade is covered by the infobox image, and we do indeed already have one of the scaffolding, so I'm inclined to remove the gallery for now. โ€”
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Halkiases. There was one Halkias' used accidentally. Fixed now. The one that remains is part of a quote. Doesn't seem like it needs a bracketed fix, but I don't have a strong opinion. โ€”
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Thanks for the review. I think we're basically set with the above. A few notes, but mostly done. FYI I did come across a source published in the time since we nominated the article, so
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Hm. The previous and next sentences use all the words I'd choose from here: front, central, and main.ย :) Seems more important to have "central" by staircase, so changing accordingly. โ€”
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Article is stable, the prose is great, I've made some comments below. There's no copyvio or original research, the article is broad and neutral. And stable. I'll put it on hold now.
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I forget which of us did that. I think it was me? Seemed like someone who designed several notable structures in NYC would likely be notable, but I haven't done much digging. โ€”
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thanks for the answer, well i guess they're both ok in terms of copyright having been placed on the account of the copyright holder so then we are done, cheers both
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Redlinks in the lead always feel jarring to me. I'd prefer it just in the body, but I may not have the strongest grasp of MOS requirements. โ€”
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Removed weddings/balls. I see them mentioned for the new Prospect Hall, but not the old one. Feel free to restore with citation. โ€”
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A very high-profile parody/homage/whatnot seems ok to me for a subject that's otherwise mainly of local/regional significance? โ€”
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I don't think this is necessary. I can replace it with the actual NPS document that shows all the listings added in 1999. โ€“
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Not yet. Demolition approved, but unclear when it'll happen. It's tucked behind scaffolding still, AFAIK. โ€”
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Tweaked this, added the album name, and combined it with the previous sentence for readability. โ€”
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Added inline cite for boxing tournament, but haven't found where weddings/balls came from yet. โ€”
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External links has an SNL spoof video!? But i do like the original video that's very cool.
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Fine with the Ulrich J. Huberty redlink, then he should be redlinked in lead as well
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Perhaps you missed the question Do you need the ref on NRISref? in the infobox
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Yup nearly there, and interesting new addition. Just a few points:
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Hi Rhododendrites and Epicgenius I'll take this on as part of the
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fair enough it's not a pass/fail issue just wanted to flag it up
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Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the
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excellent referencing and nice to have the clippings to read
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on the wording/arrangement of these features, though. โ€”
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need to be consistent between Halkiases and Halkias'
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