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I know that the grass mud horse is part of popular culture, and that academia generally lags behind social developments in its assessments, but I would guess that by now there would be some academic sources discussing the roots and implications of the icon for contemporary China. Please give a check,
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I'm not sure whether there was a conclusion here, but I can try to find some time to add more scholarly sources on the significance of the grass mud horse as it pertains to changing state-society relations, or whatever (there is a fair bit of literature to draw from). As an aside, I find the first
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This article needs a lot of work to become a GA. e.g. text needs to be focused, referencing needs to be cleaned up and unreferenced material needs referencing. Recommend a rewrite before submitting to GA again. Good luck. It's an interesting topic and deserves coverage.
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Little work has been done on the article since the nominator said he would "attempt to supplement the article with more reliable and/or scholarly sources, and wait for me to inform you if I believe that this is possible." So I'll review it now.
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I'm willing to wait, if you like, say for a week or so. Or if you prefer, I can fail it and you can renominate when you're ready. (That might put less pressure on you.) But, whatever. You choose.
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Internet chat forum cult phenomenon in China through chat forums" - it has become a chat forum cult phenomenon through chat forums - redundant.
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