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If you can do these two things, the article will almost certainly not be deleted. I would advise finding independent sources sooner rather than later; you'll have at least a week to do so, even if the article is immediately proposed for (non-speedy) deletion, but perhaps no more than that -- and the
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OK - first thing is to get rid of 'you' and the brochure style. It reads rather like an advert, and 'you' and 'we' are death to an article. Non-encyclopaedic. Second - get some coverage from the press. 'Man saved by quick response' - that sort of thing. There could well be notability here. (Personal
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If the article does get deleted, then find the sources first before attempting to recreate it. You might find it useful to create the article in your user space first; much more leeway is granted there. If the article should get deleted, you can ask an administrator (like me) to "userfy" it for
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You might also want to consider that quite a lot of the content you have here is generic stuff for first responders isn't it? You'd be better off focusing on specific things about this group which make it notable and removing the generic material which can be found at
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I have now prodded the article, i.e. it may be deleted within 7 days if it can't be improved and the message is not removed. And what Blue Square Thing said right above about being too generic is also my concern.
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1. Rewrite the article into a third-person, neutral, informational form. Imagine a newspaper article about the organization; that's the sort of tone you'll want to aim for.
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This is the first article I have created and I am still trying to sort it out so it doesn't get deleted. Anyone who wants to help feel free!
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