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I added a brief mention of his continued medical work in the executive section, but it's hard to find a natural place for it since the sources don't make a big deal about it. I think it's amazing that he was able to juggle everything, but if the sources don't go into that much I don't want to overdo
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Thanks for the review, and thanks for looking at the article so quickly after it was nominated!
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