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I've expanded that second paragraph a bit, but if you think it's no good, feel free to drop that new sentence and combine the two paragraphs instead. —
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Yello! I saw this episode when it aired and I was cracking up the whole way through, so I was excited to see it at GAN. Check out
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Can you merge the second and first paragraphs? It seems a little abrupt as is.
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Excellent work!! I'm going to pass this article. Cheers,
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