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Jerusalem as Israel's capital.(Mr Abbas spoke for more than two hours and said Mr Trump’s promise to deliver “the deal of the century” in the form of an Israeli-Palestinian peace deal had turned into “the slap of
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Jerusalem would be relevant, I think). When describing various reactions (mainly Palestinian - most of the
1115:- MEMO is not a reasonable source (you could use Haaretz directly). You are also mangling the numbers. I'll also note that this a poll of the public who is reading 2nd hand rumors in the papers on what the deal might contain - I probably would cut it out all together.
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that it could bridge the gap between the incompatible aspirations of both sides. (Readers can decide for themselves how confident they are that the current USA administration can come up with a perfect plan. That isn't really the problem though.)
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1102:- Again MEE. Also while Saudis' forcing this on the PA was in the press a few months ago (or last year?) - the latest bout of press is them backing off from forcing this down on the PA - so you'd have to date this.
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