Talk:Engineers' Club Building/GA1

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elided; and suddenly I sounded much more erudite or fluent. And there were other editors who I just felt were trying to change the spirit or tone of what I was trying to say, and it just wasn't worth the frustration of trying to work with them, regardless of whether they were good or not. The impression I have is that you're doing a tremendous amount of research, and that you're really good at finding the interesting little details and quirks of history that catch a reader's interest and that make a topic fascinating. On the other hand, it feels like you've trapped yourself in a rut of cookie-cutter structure that you're trying to hammer all your articles into, and this article, anyway (I've only given a cursory look to your others) is suffering from that: when something doesn't fit cleanly into your structure, you put it in multiple places, or in a place that doesn't really fit it, rather than reexamining the overall structure to see whether it's a best-fit for this particular article. I think, through that lens, that you're perhaps not really hearing what I'm saying about some of the things that I think could be improved, because they're challenging the uniformity of the structure that you're trying to hammer multiple articles into. I'll add a couple of notes above here (replies to your replies) in places where I think you're misunderstanding my point, but I don't have a need or desire to turn this into an argument. I think you're nearly to the finish-line on making this a very good article and, to be completely clear, I

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a residence, you might consider a more nuanced framing of the situation. You've used the word "condominium" to describe the more recent use, and I think that works well... it conveys more detail, particularly in the context of common New York residential arrangements. Whereas the original clubhouse would have been unexceptional in its time in having even quite a large dormitory for its bachelor members and guests, that aspect of clubs has become less predominant over time. The phrase "mixed use" which is common now, could be applied to its original use but might be anachronistic given that short-term residence was a common feature of clubs at the time, and thus would not have been considered an admixture then. Anyway, just a note to be careful in your use of the word "residential" that you not imply that the original use was

248:. In this case, I don't see content that warrants more than two paragraphs, and I believe you're losing your audience by spending an extra paragraph describing for them exactly what's visible (and, yes, having it as alt text for the visually-impaired is good) in a directly adjacent image. A picture is worth a thousand words, etc. You're absolutely welcome to roll the dice again and look for another reviewer who has a different understanding of "good." I'm just here to try to help you make the article better. If you had something interesting to say in a third paragraph, sure, a third paragraph of lede might be warranted. 2658: 2632: 2598: 2545: 2521: 2444: 2422: 2385: 2363: 2333: 2307: 2208: 1410: 779:

careful about the confusion that a term-of-art which differs from its literal meaning may engender. Specifically, if you contrast "club use" against "residential use" someone who's familiar with architecture, zoning, and the history of social clubs and their lodgers won't be confused, but someone without preexisting familiarity might get tripped up and come away with misunderstandings.

1478:- A general point on how accessible the article is. Console brackets? And entablature? These are linked, as are frieze and dentils, just a question on whether this is too technical? Important to point out here that this is an architecture article and I do not want to dumb it down. I'd just welcome a discussion/reassurance that most readers will be able to understand such terms. 42: 677:

self-indulgence, but you're asking the community to dub your article "good" which is a give-and-take with the outside world. In that context, you're hampering all of your articles by trying to force them into a template that's the average of what they need, rather than allowing each to have exactly what it needs to be its best. That's the point I'm trying to make.

1273:- I think it would be best for me to withdraw this nomination. In several places, it seems we have different ideas of what "good" is. Even regarding the comments that I agree with, they would require some time to remedy, since they would require a significant revision. However, your comments are very helpful and I do thank you for providing feedback here. 1241:

devotion to a uniform structure across multiple articles that few if anyone else will ever see pushes you in both of those directions, and away from indulging in interesting side-trips that a particularly fascinating building may afford, just because other buildings don't have the same kinds of features or coincidental anecdotes to relate.

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I was considering excluding some of the information. However, these details were included because the city and national governments deemed these to be historically significant. If this were not a city landmark or a National Register of Historic Places listing, these likely wouldn't be included at all

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Also, I note that you're using the word "residential" in a way that's perhaps overly black-and-white. The original intent and use of the building was, in fact, largely residential by volume, just in a more short-term way. So rather than portray it as being, first, a clubhouse, and then, subsequently,

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That was not the point I was making. The point I was making was that you have a relatively high degree of acontextual repetition, and that you could improve that by examining each piece of content and evaluating whether it was, indeed, related to the section it's within. If not, find or create a more

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The purpose of a lede is, nominally, to summarize the article. But beyond that, it's to draw the reader in and show them what's interesting about the subject, and entice them to read the rest. The cinderblock of pro-forma architectural detail dropped into the middle of the petit four of the lede does

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The Engineers' Club Building is on 40th Street, which forms the southern border of Bryant Park between Fifth and Sixth Avenues. On the same block are The Bryant and 452 Fifth Avenue to the east; the Haskins & Sells Building to the south; and the American Radiator Building and Bryant Park Studios

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You're the one who's done the research and has the materials. You seem to have a good nose for interesting detail, so I think you should exercise your judgment, without worrying that someone else will find it uninteresting. Repetition and pro-forma recitation are uninteresting, and I think a slavish

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These largely consist of news articles about specific events that took place at the building, as well as further aspects of the Engineers' Club's history that were not related to the building. If someone else feels that an important detail was omitted, they are free to add it with a reliable source.

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associated with the residential use. It could just have easily occurred before (or after). You've already discussed the national register and landmark statuses in the lede, so there's no reason to repeat those statements unless you have additional detail to relate at greater length. Arguably you do,

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Overall, I would say that the level of detail and the citations are excellent. What's there is very good, it just needs to be organized in a coherent way, and internally deduplicated. It's my guess that a more polished version of this article would be 15%-20% shorter, without losing any content, and

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Not to butt back in, but would it be worth having a section which just says why the building was considered a historic landmark, drawing from those two documents? That would make it clear why these details were worth noting, and it would allow you to gather a bunch of the perhaps-too-finicky detail

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believe that the article goes into unnecessary detail; on the contrary, your inclusion of fascinating details is what brings the article to life and makes it interesting to a general audience. It is a strength, not a weakness. The concision I recommend is a reduction in repetition. In an article of

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This is an example of the problem of sections and context that I cited. Your sections 3.2.1 and 3.2.2 are explicitly chronological. The rest of section 3 is arranged as correlated eras and uses. The landmark status is neither an era nor a use, nor related to the residential era or use. The temporal

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n 1920, the Engineers' Club purchased a house at 36 West 40th Street in 1920 from the Janeway family, intending to use the site as offices. Three years later, the club purchased 28 West 40th Street from the Wylie family. Number 36 was used as an office and stores and number 28 was used as a lounge

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For whatever it's worth, as a random American, I was familiar with both terms, and have been a member of clubs that had both features. The building my sister lived in for a while, in Montana, had a general toilet in the basement under the lobby, and many of the theaters in San Francisco have them.

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think that anything I'm suggesting requires a major re-write. To explain what I mean, once I'm done answering above, I'll do a very quick editorial pass over the article myself, all in a single edit, which you're welcome to revert, or to revert portions of as you wish; I'll take no offense if you

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Sure, that all seems reasonable to me. Again, I don't take any exception to the sections you've created, or how they're organized. I suggest, however, that having established this structure, that the article will benefit if you stick to the structure rigorously. That, by evaluating each portion of

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The problem with "consistency" is that it's an inherent compromise. None of the articles you apply it to get to be their individual best, because they're each being hammered into a framework that's an average. If the articles were collected into a book, in which a reader were going to read through

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for what it's worth, I spent an hour and a half doing an edit, which I was pretty happy with, trying to keep it all in one edit without writing intermediate changes and then, of course, I lost it because of a page refresh or something. So, I don't have that amount of time to spend on it twice, so

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on making this article the best that I think it can be. Please remember that very few readers will ever encounter more than one article you've written, so any uniformity you enforce across them will be appreciated only by you; yet that compromise will cost every article you do it to. Anyway, as I

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it was designated a landmark: it "looks almost exactly as it did more than a century ago, and stands as an architectural reminder of the emergence of New York state as the engineering center of the nation." That has to do with (1) its design, and (2) its original and intended use, not its current

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sure. I wrote for several magazines and newspapers early in my career, and a couple of books, and both of my parents were book editors, so I've been on both sides of that fence. The best editors I've had have been able to cut my writing by 30%-40% without me even being able to tell what had been

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Yeah, I wasn't so much worried that people would confuse the uses, so much as that you were using "residential" as a shorthand for the term-of-art "residential co-op", rather than in its literal sense, and if you're addressing a general audience (which a "good article" must), then you need to be

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Straw man. What I said was that I estimated that removing repetition (which is a high-priority goal) might yield an article which was 15%-20% shorter (which is either a low-priority goal, or not inherently a goal, depending upon whether you view concision as an inherit merit, or view reading as

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Speaking generally, an organizational structure for the article needs to be decided upon and adhered to. In nearly every section, there are departures which seem better suited to other sections. In "Residential use" for instance, is discussion of landmark status. The "History" section mixes the

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The lede, on the other hand, is overburdened with detail, some of which is already evident in the infobox photo. My suggestion would be to move some of the pro-forma architectural detail (essentially, the latter half of the first paragraph and the entirety of the second paragraph) down into the

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Ok; I hadn't attempted to be precise in my guess of 15%-20%, it might well be 5%. The number is irrelevant; removing tedious repetition is what's at issue. A reasonable length for the article depends entirely upon how much there is to say which can be presented in an interesting way; I have no

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which means that you need somewhere to put it. If I were writing this article, I'd probably just state it once in the lede and leave it at that, but if the March 22 detail and the note about only the exterior being protected seem substantive to you, I wouldn't argue otherwise. But think about

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If you're the only one who reads the articles as a set, rather than happening across one of them in the course of curiosity about something, then that uniformity has exactly zero value to anyone other than you. You're the one doing the work, so I don't think anyone will fault you for a little

1872:- A quibble I admit, but I feel these would better as different sentences as it starts talking about 1891 and ends talking about 1896. Better as "The New York Times wrote in 1891 that "no end of prominent men have secured admission" to the club; membership had grown to 650 members by 1896"? 1186:

Can you give some examples of additional detail that you excluded? If it was interesting to you, perhaps it would be interesting to others as well. If you feel that they're peripheral to the subject of the article (as is perhaps true of details of club membership) perhaps they're worthy of

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It actually was this contract (though the architect was already dead by that time, I forgot to add that in the article). Since Lamb was dead, his company Thomas W. Lamb Inc. no longer had a license to practice architecture in New York. Taking this commission was a violation of that.

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In this instance, I think I included this because the commissions were related to each other. The selection of the Engineers' Club's architects and the Engineering Societies' architects happened simultaneously. I have, however, removed the info about non-commissioned architects.

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Yes, I presume that you're operating in good faith, that your goal is to make the article as good as it can be, and that if you saw issues, you'd address them. And again, I do not accuse you of inconsistency. It's immaterial whether you're consistent or inconsistent

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the article against the yardstick you've established, you can improve its coherence and quality. More specifically, that you can use this method to reduce the repetitive quality which currently makes the article a little less compelling than it might otherwise be.

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part of the building's history; the article is about the building itself, so of course there will be discussion of the development. There is a history of the club to provide context to why this building was constructed. In the article, it should be noted that the

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I already said that alt text was an excellent thing. But alt text is hidden from those who don't need it, whereas growing the lede moves the rest of the article down, hiding unique content from the user. So ironically, this isn't showing more, it's hiding more.

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I feel the lead doesn't adequately explain what the Engineers' Club is. The article is about the Engineers' Club Building, so perfectly correct that the focus is on that. However for context I feel the lead should explain the Engineers' Club briefly.

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This gives a little context as to where the building, is in relation to other notable structures that abut it (e.g. the library and the American Radiator Building are immediately adjacent). I've trimmed some of the stuff about the specific club.

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them one after another, and see nothing else, giving the reader a framework in which they could expect to find each relevant detail in an expected place on each page might make sense. But that's not what Knowledge is, nor will it ever be, nor

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With regards to the "residential" comment: you have a good point. However, the short-term residential uses would be more akin to a hotel or hostel; the clubhouse was also used for meetings in addition to short-term accommodations.

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If "The Engineers' Club Building is part of an 82-unit co-op called Bryant Park Place" is a design feature, it needs to be explained why. One option would be to discuss the original design and subsequent renovations independently.

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it be. So the cost of the uniformity is clear, but I don't see any up-side to it, other than any psychological value it may have for you in a the-corners-of-all-the-magazines-in-this-stack-are-properly-aligned sort of way.

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A grand staircase leads from the west side of the lobby near the center of the house, connecting the first three stories....... The staircase splits into two legs above the lobby, serving the second- and third-story

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I acknowledge that you are trying to help improve this article. However, the consistency issue is relevant because the issues you're bringing up may be applicable to other articles as well (like I mentioned below).

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said, this article is already far better than most, and you're exceptionally good at finding and conveying interesting detail. You should run with that and make the most of it, not shy away from it. Good luck.

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residential use. You have perfectly good places to stick an "...and, by the way, this was recognized by the award of landmark status..." in, for instance, the end of the second paragraph of 3.1.2, or 3, or 3.2.

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See my assertions above relative to good faith, etc. I do not suppose you to be writing without intention, nor of purposely leaving unaddressed issues which you see. You are, therefore, arguing a straw man.

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It is intended to supplement the image, rather than replace it. Keep in mind that visually impaired readers cannot refer to the image alone and would have to scroll down to the "design" section for summary.

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Your reference, for what it's worth, it says 2-3 paragraphs. And that's a quantitative suggestion, for people who honestly have no better measure to apply. But we're talking about turning this into a

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I'm not sure. It's a little borderline, but at the time these were still part of the clubhouse building (relating to the previous sentence, "The clubhouse continued to expand in later years").

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The city block already had several social clubs, including two high-rise clubs: the Republican Club at 5 West 40th Street and the New York Club at 20 West 40th Street, both later demolished.

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In 1946, Thomas W. Lamb was hired to design a renovation for the Engineers' Club Building. This prompted the New York state government to accuse Lamb of practicing architecture illegally,

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Not at all, you put a lot of effort into this and Epicgenius has put astounding effort into multiple articles, GA nominations, their reviews and successful nominations. Very impressive.

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history of the club, the history of the building, and the history of its development. That may be appropriate, but if so, why are significant portions replicated in "Site" and "Design?"

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The straw man that you were arguing against was that a 15%-20% reduction was a goal I was advocating. The Good Article requirement #3 is a moving-of-the-goalposts in that context. I

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This refers to the Engineering Societies, which shared the same building. (This is relevant to the club because it also precipitated the club building's conversion to residences).

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parts of the club's history that are mentioned are those that are relevant to the construction of this building (i.e. why this building was even developed in the first place).

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I just removed the quoted section entirely. "Established" is verbatim from the NY Times article; otherwise, there may be some dispute over whether this is a subjective term.

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to the west. Other nearby places include the New York Public Library Main Branch across 40th Street to the north, as well as the Lord & Taylor Building to the southeast.

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If you believe this article is not concise and goes into unnecessary detail, then it would fail WP:GACR #3b; however, I would need some time to make the page more concise.

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as example of just how bad dry architectural detail can be. As a reader, seeing that second paragraph in the lede makes me anticipate an article like that example. Not a

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They were common under the foyers of early-20th-century American buildings, particularly ones that needed to serve the general public; theaters, clubs, museums, etc.

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Unlike at the base, the arches do not contain rectangular windows on the lower tier (corresponding to the 11th story), and there is a brick wall behind each column.

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The short description could use a little more detail, without getting overlong. There are lots of residential buildings, what makes this one worthy of an article?

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occurrence of the awarding of the landmark status coincided with the residential use, but that's just that: a coincidence, not a consequence, and it is, in fact,

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Broad in its coverage: it addresses the main aspects of the topic; and it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).

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Is this not like saying the front door of my house demarcates the inside from the outside? Sorry for the tongue-in-cheek language, but trying to understand.

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Yes. He did fund the building, but his money was only enough to cover the initial construction budget, not the land or any budget overruns. I've fixed this.

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All right, but if I were to reduce some details, that would require a major revision that unfortunately wouldn't fall within the time limit for this review.

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On second thought, that might work. I would just have to add a little more context to both landmark designations so it would not be just a sentence or two.

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I removed this too (except for the part about bricks behind the columns, which is distinctive because the columns on the lower stories are actual stone).

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the opposite, leading the reader to anticipate an article which is much, much drier and more boring than your actual article is. I call your attention to

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All of the aforementioned articles are about similar topics. So, for example, development is chronologically part of history and is classified as such.

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I don't agree with the concerns on structure, it is logical to me. A few tweaks in terms of repetiton suggested above, but no major changes required.

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Please don't be concerned by the list of suggestions. This article is very close to promotion. Tweaks required rather than a huge amount of work.

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Not a problem. A better word would be "corresponds", so e.g. your living room corresponds to your ground floor. I have reworded this sentence now.

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relevant to promotion (it's a personal preference), but it would be nice if the refs were in order. e.g. a set of refs as ] would be neater as .

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The level of detail is intended to be comprehensive, and I don't see how a reduction of that size will cause the article to meet the GA criteria.

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No concerns. No image which shows the actual building from street to top (all cropped to some extent). Something to consider for improvement.

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I just wonder if this is too formal. And the change to fiberglass is described in a section below, so maybe this could be removed from here?

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I've linked "dumbwaiter", which surprisingly is a common term in the U.S. for a small lift for items. I reworded the "general toilet" part.

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The New York Times wrote in 1891 that "no end of prominent men have secured admission" to the club, which had grown to 650 members by 1896.

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Please consider if these are verging into too much detail? Please note I'm not failing this criteria, would just welcome the discussion.

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Again, that's a straw man. And reducing repetition does not make something less comprehensive. Indeed, one could argue that it makes it

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Hale & Rogers and Henry G. Morse, who had not been formally invited, were hired to design the Engineering Societies' Building.

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from different places and consolidate it into one section which might be more compelling, if people understood the reason for it.

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I feel like this could be tightened up. Feels like we're saying it covers the first three stories twice in quick succession?

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I see no issue here. The landmark status occurred chronologically when the building was converted into a residential building.

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The Features section is set in the past tense. If the elevators are no longer as described, that should probably be stated.

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You're absolutely welcome to roll the dice again and look for another reviewer who has a different understanding of "good."

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Very good. I worry about overlinking in some instances though. Simple facts don't need 3 citations. A general comment

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Point of accuracy 'Intro' and 'Lower stories' say Carnegie funded the building. Later the article says "part funded".

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recreation; this being an encyclopedia rather than a novel I tend more toward the former view than I would otherwise).

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Regarding the fact that landmarks do not fall under residential uses, I have changed the header to "Residential era".

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don't bother waiting for that, if you were. My apologies. You've got an interesting article and an interesting topic.

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The second paragraph provides information that summarizes a major section of the article, as does the third paragraph

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The "History" section mixes the history of the club, the history of the building, and the history of its development.

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I don't think that does much to address my concerns, but I'm just some guy, and you're the one doing the work here.

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with a humorous speech by Mark Twain, who paid respect to Carnegie while making fun of the spelling of his surname

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Next to the elevators was a breakfast room, which could also be used for large private dinners. The breakfast room

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Nepotism "may" -- are we confident using this word based on the sources? It's OK if the sources are supportive.

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One side of the lobby has been converted to Royce' Chocolate and the other side contains Gotham Beauty Lounge.

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The cost is $ 225k, but I'm betting the 220k figure is a rounding error (being within 2% of the 225k figure).

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The reception room was 20 ft (6.1 m) high with predominantly marble decorations. The reception room adjoined

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A great article. Some comments and suggestions to be acted upon/discussed. But very close to promotion.

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The three elevators and the stairs run from basement to roof; one elevator is designed meant for freight

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Louise Carnegie laid the building's cornerstone, a capsule filled with various contemporary artifacts.

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When I wrote the article, I had to exclude about 20-30% of the details to fulfill the focus criterion.

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Yes, the sources say that nepotism was a probable factor but do not point to it being a certainty.

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appropriate section, and see whether you've already covered it there. If so, delete. If not, move.

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This was previously linked (all the way in the "site" section), so it may be an overlink here.

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Does that not suggest a problem to you, given that each article is about a different subject?

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From quote above, cost mentioned is 225k. But 220k later in the article. Which is correct?

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The Engineers' Club site cost $ 225,000, while the engineering societies' site cost $ 517,000

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The old grill in the rear of the lobby was converted into an apartment with 14 ft-on (4.3 m)

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suggestion as to what a reasonable length might be, since I'm not a subject-matter expert.

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the main library building, then under construction? And is there a link for the library?

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The site would also overlook Bryant Park and the under-construction main library building.

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Again, I don't see an issue with this; in fact, I put the sections this way intentionally.

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The balcony and windows overlooking Bryant Park demarcated the banquet room from outside.

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By 1981, one of the ground-floor storefronts contained a florist, Galerie Felix Flower.

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Splitting hairs, sorry. But was it this contract, or just a conincidence in timing?

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attempt to preserve any uniformity with other articles you've written, they'll focus

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another quibble, but do architects do the work? Do they not design and direct work?

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It is not a design feature but part of the description, so I have now moved it down.

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Therefore, it is better when integrated chronologically in the residential section.

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don't seem to indicate that this requires a 15 to 20 percent reduction in content.

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is introduced in the History section. This needs to be at the first mention.

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The main entrance leads to a vestibule, which in turn connected to the lobby.

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Very pleased to pass this. Prompt and thorough repsonse to my comments by

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I have placed the sections in a similar format for hundreds of articles.

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Second sentence could start "this room adjoined" to remove repetition.

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A very strong article. These are comments/suggestions for tweaks only:

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be a "landmark statuses" section, but that would be two sentences long.

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Above the entrance are large console brackets carrying an entablature

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For the short description, I can say "Residential co-op", but as for

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In "Residential use" for instance, is discussion of landmark status.

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The current cornice dates to the 1990s and is made of fiberglass.

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No context for the suggested 12-mile shaft. What was his idea?

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I do not recommend removing any detail, nor any major revision.

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I can trim it here and there, which could save about 5 percent

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I have fixed the grammatical tenses of the "features" section.

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Thanks for the review. I'll address these portions one by one.

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Design section, if any of it isn't already present there.

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while the restoration architects were removing the stone

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The primary facade is on the north, facing 40th Street.

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The societies ultimately sold their building in 1960.

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Yes, your new short description is more compelling.

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