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Hi there Sainsf, I have addressed all your comments, bar one: the currency conversion. There is no wiki template to convert the currency to AUD, only USD, which I think in this instance is irrelevant. Would you reconsider that requirement? Thank you for your reminder to come back, I'm sorry it took
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A week has already passed without any response. I have been busy lately, so I could not turn up here. I think I can wait till next Sunday at most; if the review gets no response from the nominator or any other editor who wishes to help with the issues here I will have to fail this nomination.
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Thanks for the reply. None of my suggestions are strict, I leave it to you as the nominator should know the article better. :) Alright, I notice no more troubles with the article. An interesting read. I am ready to promote it. Cheers!
435:! I am working on a journal article critique for uni at the moment but will try to find time ASAP for this article - another motivator to finish my assignment! :):) I really appreciate your time on this,
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We generally do not keep citations in the lead. I would like them removed and the facts to be mentioned in the main text. If relevant enough facts can be added to the lead.
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I understand this refers to the pink look of the logo, but can it be stated more explicitly in the article?
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It is the third largest pizza chain in the country with 12% share of
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