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basic broad overview of the topic such that anyone who may stumble on this page may understand what your page is on. I thought this section was done well, I liked the break down of strata. I found your history and formation section very informative and well done with citations. This section however could be touched up in terms of wording in a couple of sentences but over all well done! The
Geological Relevance section seemed to be your weakest point on the page due to overall vagueness of what is being said. I understand that studying this location will give in site on earths geology, but maybe if you were to add specific research that has been done or what in specific was been discovered in early earth research.
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First off this is a great page with lots of detailed information. However, I don't know if the average person would be able to read and comprehend the topic and some of the the vocabulary. Maybe try to explain in more detail some of the topic you brought up that don't have their own wiki page. Also I
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Overall great page! For starters you may consider adding a title to the introductory paragraph which seems to the location and basic geologic background of the region. This portion could potentially just go along with the initial descriptions section. There is some importance on attempting to give a
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Overall, the term is well interpreted, and through the text the author offers lot of link which point to other terms. I will recommend more information in geologic background and give a separate section for tectonics or the revolution of the region. From this page, I've also learned from the author:
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The author gave a clear and concise decryption of the
Eastern Pilbara Crato. However, I think there is relatively less information in "tectonic" or to say "dynamic" and "evolution" (the author did provide. For example, in the section of history and formation, but I think it eoulf be better to give a
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In your introduction, you might want to be a little more specific about why the "eastern" portion of the
Pilbara Craton is separate from the entire craton. For example, is it the only area that contains a greenstone belt? Is it because that is the only place the rocks are exposed?
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This is a well written and structured article. I enjoyed reading it and looking at the various pictures and diagrams. There are only a couple of suggestions which you might wish to consider. First, there are multiple red colored links under sections
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Consider renaming the title of this section... Because it encompasses a lot about the area. Maybe "overview" or "physical evidence" or even "Description of the landscape." I can't really come up with a good title, but just think about it.
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Pilbara: vertical tectonics and subduction accretion arcs. But only vertical tectonics theory is introduced in
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section you have 4 subtitles: Archean Crust; Granitic Domes and
Greenstone Belts; TTG; Regional Structures. I think those subtitles is not really a parallelism so you might better to put it that way: 1. Geological Setting =:
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like your figure, however, you might want to reference it on your page and explain it in more depth so people will have a better idea of what it's showing. But overall great page with a lot of good information.
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you could try to create a real list, not just one integrated into the paragraph itself. I enjoyed viewing the pictures and the diagrams were simple and easy to understand. Great list of references.
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Your article is a good introduction to
Eastern Pilbara Craton. The content is informative and the page layout is good. Some suggestions may help you to improve this article to a better one.
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Short, concise, easy to understand. Great section. Again, consider putting dates into bullet points for easier viewing/ understanding. (I'll probably do this for my own page, actually!)
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