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It is not necessary to put a footnote for each sequential sentences which has the same reference. This means that the reference at the end of the first sentence of the
Geography and Geology section "The Eifuku seamounts are located northwest of Farallon de Pajaros island in the Northern Marianas." Is
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is italicised and mentioned as synonymous with Eifuku. Please amend this and name the two seamounts. This is repeated in the second paragraph of the section about the
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I understand, but unfortunately the articles referenced are not a single page in length. I think we need to make them consistent. I have edited the references for
Anderson, Johnson & Nonaka 2018 and Rossi & Tunnicliffe 2017 to show what I mean.
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The paragraph "There are differences between the microbiotas of different vent sites, with distinct metabolic traits and species composition." is very short. Is there any more information that can be added or can it be merged with another paragraph?
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and created a redirect from NW Eifuku. I also amended a sentence to remove the ambiguity about the two mounts. The two paragraphs in the lead each mention "Champagne". I think it would flow better if the mentions were continuous. What do you think?
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This looks an interesting article about a subject that takes me back to work I was involved in a long time ago with tropical coastal managers. I will start a review shortly.
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