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I have one concern about the media. One of the images, the image of patrons on the lawn, shows a fairly close, high-enough resolution to be recognizable shot of a patron's face. I'm not super familiar with the nuances of privacy law, but is this a situation in which the subject would have to give
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I don't think this should be an issue, as it is not disallowed in
Wikimedia Commons, but I'll look into replacing it. I took hundreds of pictures of the park a couple months ago.
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permission for the image to be released? The person would not be trackable to get said permission, so somebody probably better look into the applicable privacy law with that.
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The point is the highest spot in the
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Source 1: This takes me to a search function page. It would be nice to have the link directly to the subsite where Fort Tryon Park is listed, if possible.
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I think listing the number of citations for public intercourse in 2018 constitutes excessive detail, although you may disagree with me about this.
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I haven't checked the references yet, I'll get along to that soon. I've left some preliminary comments about the other criteria. Good work.
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