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The section started as an incomplete list but I've now added all the ones I can find from various sites. It's heading towards complete so I've deleted the notice at the start of the list. I agree it is probably a little long but I thought it worth including all I could find as one of his claims to
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This one is tricky. Do your sources say economic zoology or economic entomology? If the first one, then we shouldn't link it to what is apparently a sub-field, but as he was an entomologist logically we should be right in saying economic entomology, but if your sources don't say so it would be OR.
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Okay I took a proper look at the article (earlier I didn't really read it) and realized it is a natural history article! Looks like a different one from you and something in my field :) This is going to be a great read.
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Yes, sources say economic zoology, and economic entomology is linked anyway so it wasn't a solution I was very happy with. But given that link is close by, I'd prefer to leave economic zoology unlinked.
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