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Mid-to-late 19th-century - the last sentence in this section - you have interpreted the reference in the best way possible.
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is yellow so it cannot be used for controversial information. I see that you used it for three items - all uncontroversial
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20th-century The section and much of the article rely on citation 1 - but all of the citations line up in with the text
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Ok, I think all of your concerns have been addressed. By the way, thanks for taking the time to review the article.
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Thank you. I will be traveling tomorrow so if we have a delay I will not get back to the nomination until the 18th.
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The lead presents a good summary of the article and all of the information is repeated and cited in the body
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It is not a must but you can consider adding these templates to dollar figures. I find them interesting
826:"The Key House was a brick colonial that was two-and-a-half stories" consider "and" instead of "that" 1081:
is a non free and the summary and license seems incomplete. I updated it with appropriate language
751:"altered the Key House's appearance" consider rewrite to "altered the appearance of the Key House" 1462: 1458: 1519: 414:"Key learnt of a doctor" might be better to use American English because the subject is American 1466: 1252:. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with 1113: 250: 229: 207: 179: 39: 1253: 504:"approximately 5O per cent" percent should be one word - and 50 may be using a letter "o"? 796:"but after a local outcry about saving" here outcry seems colloquial and not encyclopedic 1413:: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. 1056:
Earwig is at 50% and it is because the nominator used several long quotes. Not an issue
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20th-century the first, second, third, fouth paragraph citations line up with text
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766:"Amongst the donated items" We should use American English as mentioned above 691:"he left the public spotlight" seems colloquial consider "left public life" 121: 1385:. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see 1096:
There are 9 images in the article and the other ones are properly licensed
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I think I have completed the review and I await your edits and response.
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Citation 5 supports the text well-known, the citation says famous
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Memorial park section, I am unable tom access the citations AGF
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Mid-to-late 19th-century spot checked citations match the text
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Final years spot checked citations in the section line up
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the kitchen and dining room.. might be extra puncuation
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Key's life after the war - citations match the text
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