492:. The article looks better. If you feel the MOS policy will not suit the article, then you can choose not to write the numbers in digits. I think I will drop the money conversion suggestion; it is not followed in many articles and I myself am clueless about its documentation. About the grammar trouble, I see I did not pay attention there. You need not rewrite it the way I suggested. This article is indeed a great job. No copyvio detected, sources, images and prose look good to me. I believe it meets all the GA criteria now. I am happy to promote this. Excellent work!
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Thank you for promoting my very first Good article, really appreciate you devoting your time to read it. Thank you again, and have a nice day.
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The show debuted on E!, an
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The prose is well-written and the sources look good. That should be all. Good luck!
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