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Hi Jaguar, I have rectified most the concerns outlined by you in the "initial comments" section except for the linking of "Santubong" and "Lidah Tanah" in the "History" section. It seems that there are very few online sources that can further describe these places during the era of
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Extremely impressive - the article has improved by leaps and bounds! The lead has been expanded to summarise the article and the prose has improved so much than before this GAN. Thanks for all your efforts with this article, it's very deserving of GA
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In its current standing there are a lot of prose issues and lack of content that stand in the way of this becoming GA. The major concerns here is that the lead does not summarise the article, and that there are so mentions of
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Hi, I'll take this one and will finish the review within 48 hours. Thanks!
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