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Just to add to "other stuff". HMS Beagle appears in the Ealing Studios production of "The Big Blockade" (1941), a wartime propaganda film.
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Actually, since the gun is named, I don't believe that either suggestion is appropriate. They'd be fine if the text used "third" gun.
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I don't agree with these; your suggestion turns the sentence into passive voice. The existing text is simpler and more direct.
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Complement is 134 in text but 138 in infobox (I assume the infobox should refer to its peacetime complement not its wartime).
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Running Checklinks, the external link to u-boat net is described as suspicious (but it works for me?).
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In the text, the turbines are as Brown-Curtis when infobox says they are Parsons.
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Thanks for catching the little inconsistencies between the infobox and text.--
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I can accept that; slipping into passive voice is a bad habit of mine.
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