Knowledge (XXG)

Talk:HMS Daring (H16)/GA1

Source 📝

528: 504: 490: 458: 433: 406: 396: 370: 356: 342: 311: 277: 42: 186:
Description: Was this the standard setup for a D class destroyer? Obviously you don't need to go into great detail and compare everything, but if there was any specific changes then that should be mentioned.
80: 47: 70: 126: 122: 52: 245: 107: 482: 251: 75: 99: 362: 207:
Career: Although I agree that Otto Kretschmer is legendary, technically it's non neutral. Can you replace with something else?
190:
Yeah, this was the standard configuration for the class, although half had the 2x 2-pdrs and half had 2x quad .50-calibre MGs.
283: 328: 303: 215: 115: 17: 472: 291: 539: 233: 211: 167: 151: 419: 287: 255: 92: 496: 299: 295: 348: 534: 228: 162: 146: 544: 238: 219: 172: 156: 195:
Career: I moved a reference to the next punctuation mark after HMS
438:
Following that amendment, the article is now neutral in tone.
134: 103: 199:
as it looked a bit lost in the middle of a sentence.
210:
Simplest to just delete it. Thanks for the review.--
227:Other than that, I think it's all good to go. 8: 481:(images are tagged and non-free images have 161:I will be reviewing this article shortly. 30: 61: 33: 7: 476:, where possible and appropriate. 24: 526: 502: 488: 456: 431: 428:Fair representation without bias 404: 394: 368: 354: 340: 309: 275: 254:for what the criteria are, and 181:All external links functioning. 509:Image has appropriate licence. 1: 375:Suitable references in place. 527: 503: 489: 457: 432: 405: 395: 369: 355: 341: 310: 276: 565: 545:11:58, 13 July 2011 (UTC) 239:17:25, 12 July 2011 (UTC) 220:04:32, 13 July 2011 (UTC) 173:17:14, 12 July 2011 (UTC) 157:17:14, 12 July 2011 (UTC) 533:All in all a good job. 265:reasonably well written 495:(appropriate use with 258:for what they are not) 470:It is illustrated by 420:neutral point of view 384:broad in its coverage 18:Talk:HMS Daring (H16) 483:fair use rationales 453:No edit wars, etc. 324:factually accurate 497:suitable captions 89: 88: 556: 542: 537: 530: 529: 506: 505: 492: 491: 460: 459: 435: 434: 408: 407: 398: 397: 372: 371: 358: 357: 349:reliable sources 344: 343: 313: 312: 279: 278: 236: 231: 170: 165: 154: 149: 139: 130: 111: 43:Copyvio detector 31: 564: 563: 559: 558: 557: 555: 554: 553: 540: 535: 417:It follows the 391:(major aspects) 234: 229: 168: 163: 152: 147: 120: 97: 91: 85: 57: 29: 22: 21: 20: 12: 11: 5: 562: 560: 552: 551: 550: 549: 548: 547: 514: 513: 512: 511: 510: 468: 467: 466: 465: 464: 443: 442: 441: 440: 439: 415: 414: 413: 412: 411: 380: 379: 378: 377: 376: 347:(citations to 320: 319: 318: 317: 316: 260: 259: 225: 224: 223: 222: 205: 204: 203: 193: 192: 191: 183: 182: 179: 178:No dab issues. 140: 87: 86: 84: 83: 78: 73: 67: 64: 63: 59: 58: 56: 55: 53:External links 50: 45: 39: 36: 35: 28: 25: 23: 15: 14: 13: 10: 9: 6: 4: 3: 2: 561: 546: 543: 538: 532: 531: 524: 521: 520: 518: 515: 508: 507: 500: 498: 486: 484: 478: 477: 475: 474: 469: 462: 461: 454: 451: 450: 448: 444: 437: 436: 429: 426: 425: 423: 421: 416: 410: 409: 402: 392: 388: 387: 385: 381: 374: 373: 366: 364: 352: 350: 338: 334: 333: 331: 330: 325: 321: 315: 314: 307: 305: 301: 297: 293: 289: 285: 273: 269: 268: 266: 262: 261: 257: 253: 249: 247: 243: 242: 241: 240: 237: 232: 221: 217: 213: 212:Sturmvogel 66 209: 208: 206: 201: 200: 198: 194: 189: 188: 185: 184: 180: 177: 176: 175: 174: 171: 166: 159: 158: 155: 150: 145: 141: 138: 137: 133: 128: 124: 119: 118: 114: 109: 105: 101: 96: 95: 82: 79: 77: 74: 72: 69: 68: 66: 65: 60: 54: 51: 49: 46: 44: 41: 40: 38: 37: 32: 26: 19: 522: 516: 494: 480: 471: 452: 446: 427: 418: 400: 390: 383: 360: 346: 337:(references) 336: 327: 323: 281: 271: 264: 244: 226: 196: 160: 143: 142: 135: 131: 117:Article talk 116: 112: 93: 90: 81:Instructions 463:All stable. 296:word choice 104:visual edit 329:verifiable 48:Authorship 34:GA toolbox 523:Pass/Fail 401:(focused) 144:Reviewer: 71:Templates 62:Reviewing 27:GA Review 536:Miyagawa 230:Miyagawa 164:Miyagawa 148:Miyagawa 76:Criteria 517:Overall 300:fiction 272:(prose) 197:Wishart 127:history 108:history 94:Article 541:(talk) 473:images 447:stable 445:It is 422:policy 382:It is 322:It is 302:, and 292:layout 263:It is 248:review 235:(talk) 169:(talk) 153:(talk) 304:lists 250:(see 136:Watch 16:< 326:and 288:lead 286:for 256:here 252:here 216:talk 123:edit 100:edit 284:MoS 525:: 519:: 501:: 493:b 487:: 479:a 455:: 449:. 430:: 424:. 403:: 399:b 393:: 389:a 386:. 367:: 363:OR 359:c 353:: 345:b 339:: 335:a 332:. 308:: 298:, 294:, 290:, 280:b 274:: 270:a 267:. 246:GA 218:) 202:OK 125:| 106:| 102:| 499:) 485:) 365:) 361:( 351:) 306:) 282:( 214:( 132:· 129:) 121:( 113:· 110:) 98:(

Index

Talk:HMS Daring (H16)
Copyvio detector
Authorship
External links
Templates
Criteria
Instructions
Article
edit
visual edit
history
Article talk
edit
history
Watch
Miyagawa
(talk)
17:14, 12 July 2011 (UTC)
Miyagawa
(talk)
17:14, 12 July 2011 (UTC)
Sturmvogel 66
talk
04:32, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
Miyagawa
(talk)
17:25, 12 July 2011 (UTC)
GA
here
here

Text is available under the Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike License. Additional terms may apply.