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just my opinion, that the RN saw no role for the BB in an era of nuclear-tipped SSMs and that they could use
Vanguard's maintenance costs more productively elsewhere. I've summed up both in the existing text as too expensive and obsolete with a cite and that's about the best that can be done without digging into archival material, although Jc3s5H has a good suggestion that the Times might have more info in its back issues, if anyone has access. I will remind him that the
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2nd half of the 20th century. Saying she was too expensive to maintain implies that she wasn't worth the expense, considering the military service she could render. So without understanding what military service she was still able to render and the cost of providing that service with other ship types, the reader still does not really understand why she was scrapped.
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I'm sure there must be a good source that sums up the situation, but I have not found it. I would point out that the good article process is about how all the editors have used the resources online and in decent libraries to write a good article. It is irrelevant that a particular author has done the
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the rapid improvement in aircraft sensors and fast nuclear subs, by 1960, it must have seemed that battleships would soon be relegated to shore bombardment. Of course, I can't go around sticking personal opinion into articles, so a reliable source would be needed to find why the Royal Navy considered
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November that King George VI was planning to take a short cruise for his health aboard Vanguard. Captain John Litchfield assumed command on 21 December while the ship was still refitting, but the King died on 6 February 1952 before he could make his cruise. A detachment
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Personally, I'm inclined to think that even into the early 1960s, aircraft were considerably less effective at night and in poor weather, compared to today. Diesel subs couldn't keep up with capital ships. So battleships still had a role in surface naval warfare in poor weather or at night. But with
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First off, the citation for this paragraph is McCart; I do hope you checked that source to make sure it says she was too expensive to maintain. Keep in mind that the reader of this article may not have read about battleships in general, and may have no idea why battleships fell out of favor in the
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Parliamentary whining about her maintenance cost, so that's OK. But the rest of what you're asking for is OR without a clear statement from my sources, which they don't have. Is it a coincidence that both the US and UK began mass scrappings of their battleships in the late 1950s?
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Look at my userpage; I've written hundreds of GAs, plus dozens of A-class and FA-class articles, mostly on ships, so don't patronize me about the GA process. I've likely written more GAs by half an order of magnitude than you've even reviewed. So I don't think that your suggested note is either
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Her design was begun before the war began because the
British heavy gun industry had declined so much after World War I that it could not built enough guns for more than two battleships per year, although there was no real limit on how many hulls could be built. However, enough old guns and gun
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I don't have access to the references in the article, but the external link "HMS Vanguard: A short history of
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into a position to aid NATO. Other possibilities to the scrapping include an inability to upgrade the ship in any capacity (IE: not able to add to add missiles, not capable of ASW ops, etc), or perhaps because of a need the ship's materials. At the onset of World War II the US scrapped
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Another item I meant to mention is there should be an explanation about why she was scrapped. This could be short, with a link to an article that discusses why the usefulness of all battleships became doubtful around this time. Also, you might compare the scrapping date of the
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says the article must address every main point, and note 4 says that this is a lesser standard that the comprehensiveness required for FA-class articles. I submit that the article as currently written meets this standard, even if less thorough than Jc3s5H might
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article draws on many sources to try to describe why most battleships were scrapped in the two decades after WWII. I suppose you could just put a sentence like "For a discussion about the decline in the number of battleships after World War II, see
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But they didn't, did they? The King George Vs were scrapped in the 40s, Vanguard lasted until 1960, the Iowas lasted into the 21st
Century. Us battleship fans may be so familiar with all of this it needs no explanation but most people won't be.
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was scrapped because she was obsolete, or to say than she was the last
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