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Its mentioned in a preceding paragraph. Since it's mentioned at the beginning a new paragraph, it needs to be restated. I can assume its referring to the "original describers", but I can just as easy come to the conclusion it is a separate set of describers.
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Excellent, did a few CE's. Attempted to strike a good balance between the words I pointed out and the prose you had, most of the edits I did were basic clarifications and cosmetic work. Article has passed GA review, congrats!!!!
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Despite the face being so wide, it was rather flat (reduced mid-facial prognathism), and resembles the condition found in modern humans, the far more ancient H. antecessor, and other Middle
Pleistocene Chinese
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After reviewing, the page is very well done. A few bits of clarification and word clean-up are needed but otherwise, the page is nearly ready. Throwing the page on review and leaving it open until
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I see what you mean. Perhaps moving the location map to below the infobox, and putting the bridge images in a gallery template after the 'Paleoenvironment' section would suffice.
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Knowledge. TLDR; not a copy-vio but worth mentioning.
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1569:Pass/Fail
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106:Templates
97:Reviewing
27:GA Review
791:removed
729:Taxonomy
192:contribs
182:Etriusus
111:Criteria
34:Passed.
1563:Overall
1440:focused
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